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A square to look out of
everything I can see.
Closed at the eve of night
goodnight to thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 4/7/2015 7:35:00 AM
Nice Haiku here Sharon!! You've presented an interesting metaphor with "a square to look out of . . . ." I seem to gravitate toward writing Tankas and Chokas. The Haiku calls for the specific precision that you've used so well with this thought. A Big "7" -- of course!! Best Always, Gary
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 4/10/2015 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Gary once again for your kind words of encouragement and awesome ratings I am not sure I deserve it, but I do enjoy them, Thank you. I am trying to learn all these new to me ways of writing. I honestly did not know there were so many. God Bless as always....Sharon G.