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My Will

Ice frosting this hill. Choking and twisting my will. Slipping I struggle to my feet. Falling backwards,bewildered still. Shoving myself forward , Allowing my love to spill, Wind so cold and treaterous, my spirit it stuggles to kill. March onward;one step,two steps more. I am not accepting warm retreat. The end is not the final score.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 2:55:00 PM
i love WINE......but the poem's about 4-20.....red wine tree : )
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Date: 4/21/2009 11:41:00 PM
Very wise words in the final Line Robin.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/19/2009 5:30:00 AM
rock-on! Robin! nice poem Jim
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Date: 3/4/2009 3:22:00 PM
Perseverance, is the last thing we depend on just before we fall to our knees. I loved this write, it rings true.-Always Alexandra
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Date: 1/5/2009 8:20:00 AM
A strong and admirable will! And a wonderful write. Happy birthday soon Robin, may it be a wonderful year in every way! Love, Shar
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