Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Limerick

My Wife Lomet

My wife Lomet fell in love with a comet
                        Hugged the Tuttle and fastened him to grommet
                                             Tuttle was tattler
                                             Snaky and rattler 
                               Lashed his tail in parabolic trail--kismet












   my wife lomet/limerick/copyright (c) rajat kanti chakrabarty 21 november 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 21, 2014 at 9:43 AM Very clever and creative, Rajat! Keep them coming...have a beautiful weekend! Hugs, Rhonda Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 21, 2014 at 9:56 AM Love Rhonda. Enjoy your weekend with fun frolic music anything you want.Take care XXXXXRAJAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 21, 2014 at 9:42 AM Very clever and creative, Rajat! Keep them coming...have a beautiful weekend! Hugs, Rhonda

Earl Schumacker November 21, 2014 at 4:45 AM Hi Rajat, Very cleverly crafted limerick. Very funny also. The parabolic trail tie in with allegorical, parable, "tale" (or story) and "tail" of a comet connection was interesting. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Have a great day. Earl Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 21, 2014 at 5:10 AM earl, thank you for your excellent comment.you have seen this poem from a new angle. great. highly appreciated.love.take care. fabulous weekend....RAJAT