My Whole Body Shivered

I watch your lips move as you speak, your tongue curls against your teeth. I feel your smile as we share a look. I want to know your likes, your dislikes. What are your hopes and dreams? I want to hear you laugh. Walking, your hand touches mine, we play with the simple touch of each other's hands. I don't tell you but my whole body shivers. An hour passes, it feels like seconds. We lie looking up, I look but all I can see is you. I don't tell you but my whole body shivers. Your face is etched permanently on my eyes. Your stare is gentle. I feel sand under my feet. I hear waves against the rocks. I don't tell you but my whole body shivers. We are standing at the steps in front of your house. Sitting holding hands. We never moved from that first spot. It was my heart that traveled miles. An angel slowly dims the lights. Day turns into night. I don't tell you but my whole body shivers. You lean an inch. I lean two. My heart like a bonfire ignites. I swim a blissful ocean. Our lips touch. We move closer. Our mouths slowly, ever so slowly, meet and part. We kiss. I say good night. I walk away the fullness of you embedded in my heart. I didn't say - but you know - my whole body shivered. Love above all else Love Armand
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A. Sharma Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 2:52 AM
Wonderful write Maurice,, a beyond super 7 my friend,, congrats on first place win!
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 10:57 PM
An example if good writing. Enjoyed it Maurice. God bless. Congratulation on win. Love and Regards
A  Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 4:02 PM
well deserved win Maurice. Have a nice day. SKAt
Smith Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:43 PM
Stopping back with my congrats
Guzzi Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:09 PM
You go Armand, a fav & a 7 Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Armand - come back soon I MISS YOU:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your win, Maurice, romantic shiver. Eve
A   Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 9:46 AM
MAURICE, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :) Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Own your Beauty" if you'd like or have time. Have yourself a wonderful day. Love LINDA
Nance Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 9:27 PM
That is awesome. I love the centering, it feels so right to read. Well done, now that get a 7 and fav sugar. i dig it
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Cas you are so supportive. Thank you.
Kiser Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 2:08 PM
You're still shivering, aren't you? That was absolutely beautiful.
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 3:37 PM
thank you. You are absolutely beautiful.
And Gerhard Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Awesome Maurice !! last sentence is speaking of real deep soul love between two lovers !
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 3:36 PM
thank you i always love with all my heart.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Wow!! That One is simply catchy and intriguing.. Lovely write..:)
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:09 PM
thank you Olive.
Mehta Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 9:24 AM
Oh, romance, romance and romance, Maurice
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:08 PM
yes sir so our lifes are
Costello Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 9:24 AM
I love that you you never moved but that she moved you-clever---- very romantic and sensual write. :-)
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:48 PM
thank you Christine.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 9:00 AM
This is a romantic gem!
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:45 PM
how kind of you Richard.
Gorelick Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 8:25 AM
Im shivering after reading this, oh so romantic, piece. To my favorites. BG
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:44 PM
thank you Barbara.
Smith Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 8:25 AM
You had me at the first shiver....how beautiful...
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:43 PM
glad you liked it Mr. Cruise.
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Wow and my body is tingling reading this Maurice - Fabulous write my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:15 AM
HAHAHAHA!!!!
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 1:14 PM
A bit of what LOL :-) hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:41 PM
did you want to come over for a bit.
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