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My Whole Body Shivered

I watch your lips move as you speak, your tongue curls against your teeth. I feel your smile as we share a look. I want to know your likes, your dislikes. What are your hopes and dreams? I want to hear you laugh. Walking, your hand touches mine, we play with the simple touch of each other's hands. I don't tell you but my whole body shivers. An hour passes, it feels like seconds. We lie looking up, I look but all I can see is you. I don't tell you but my whole body shivers. Your face is etched permanently on my eyes. Your stare is gentle. I feel sand under my feet. I hear waves against the rocks. I don't tell you but my whole body shivers. We are standing at the steps in front of your house. Sitting holding hands. We never moved from that first spot. It was my heart that traveled miles. An angel slowly dims the lights. Day turns into night. I don't tell you but my whole body shivers. You lean an inch. I lean two. My heart like a bonfire ignites. I swim a blissful ocean. Our lips touch. We move closer. Our mouths slowly, ever so slowly, meet and part. We kiss. I say good night. I walk away the fullness of you embedded in my heart. I didn't say - but you know - my whole body shivered. Love above all else Love Armand

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Date: 2/2/2015 2:52:00 AM
Wonderful write Maurice,, a beyond super 7 my friend,, congrats on first place win!
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Date: 2/1/2015 10:57:00 PM
An example if good writing. Enjoyed it Maurice. God bless. Congratulation on win. Love and Regards
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Date: 2/1/2015 4:02:00 PM
well deserved win Maurice. Have a nice day. SKAt
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:43:00 PM
Stopping back with my congrats
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:09:00 PM
You go Armand, a fav & a 7 Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/1/2015 9:53:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Armand - come back soon I MISS YOU:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/1/2015 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Maurice, romantic shiver. Eve
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Date: 2/1/2015 9:46:00 AM
MAURICE, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :) Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Own your Beauty" if you'd like or have time. Have yourself a wonderful day. Love LINDA
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Date: 9/10/2014 9:27:00 PM
That is awesome. I love the centering, it feels so right to read. Well done, now that get a 7 and fav sugar. i dig it
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 9:34:00 PM
Cas you are so supportive. Thank you.
Date: 9/10/2014 2:08:00 PM
You're still shivering, aren't you? That was absolutely beautiful.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 3:37:00 PM
thank you. You are absolutely beautiful.
Date: 9/10/2014 1:56:00 PM
Awesome Maurice !! last sentence is speaking of real deep soul love between two lovers !
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 3:36:00 PM
thank you i always love with all my heart.
Date: 9/10/2014 10:05:00 AM
Wow!! That One is simply catchy and intriguing.. Lovely write..:)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 1:09:00 PM
thank you Olive.
Date: 9/10/2014 9:24:00 AM
Oh, romance, romance and romance, Maurice
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 1:08:00 PM
yes sir so our lifes are
Date: 9/10/2014 9:24:00 AM
I love that you you never moved but that she moved you-clever---- very romantic and sensual write. :-)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 12:48:00 PM
thank you Christine.
Date: 9/10/2014 9:00:00 AM
This is a romantic gem!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 12:45:00 PM
how kind of you Richard.
Date: 9/10/2014 8:25:00 AM
Im shivering after reading this, oh so romantic, piece. To my favorites. BG
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 12:44:00 PM
thank you Barbara.
Date: 9/10/2014 8:25:00 AM
You had me at the first shiver....how beautiful...
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 12:43:00 PM
glad you liked it Mr. Cruise.
Date: 9/10/2014 8:08:00 AM
Wow and my body is tingling reading this Maurice - Fabulous write my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/23/2014 2:15:00 AM
HAHAHAHA!!!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 1:14:00 PM
A bit of what LOL :-) hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 12:41:00 PM
did you want to come over for a bit.

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