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My Walk

If I asked you to walk with me How many steps would you take Would you stop and wonder is this all a mistake If I asked you to walk with me Would you stay by my side Or would you abandon me in my darkest time If I asked you to walk with me Would you weather the storm Or would you tell me you can't handle the burden you want me no more If I asked you to walk with me How far would you go Knowing my heart was heavy would you help carry my load What if I reached out for your hand would you turn and walk away How would you feel if you knew I was alone and afraid If you send me walking by myself would you ask me why Or would you leave me knowing to yours filled my eyes I have started walking I know my journey will be long But I have to know will you be there in the end when I find my way home

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2016 1:26:00 PM

Michael Alexander,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/3/2016 8:34:00 PM

Michael, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Ramadhan Dunia

Date: 8/31/2016 2:10:00 PM

this is nice...I feel like walking through the journey with you