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My Vow

Four years ago I wouldn't have thought Of you as a dream that I sought, Rippling into my reality you slowly went Even the tides of my perception have slowly been bent, Very close you were to me probably a month or two, Even the birds chirping around us surprisingly knew, Reality then came by and suddenly, it was destined that you too. Irritated by the confusion your presence brought me Never ending questions in my head not letting me be, Years of love's absence then you came On a sunny Wednesday smiling just the same, Ultimate finale to my miserable single life, Reasoning now for the purpose of making you my wife, Everlasting bliss was always my goal, Your happines I seek and your majestic soul, Elevating me to the man I am now, Surreal that Today I'm telling you my vow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/27/2016 4:06:00 AM
Greetings Angelus. Congrats for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations, Angelus, I like your style. Regards, Viv
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 7/25/2016 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Viv.
Date: 7/24/2016 4:19:00 PM
Angelus, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 7/25/2016 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Skat
Date: 7/24/2016 11:30:00 AM
Hi Angelus, This is very romantic. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 7/25/2016 7:04:00 AM
I didn't know I won till I checked it Today. Thanks Alexis!

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