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My Virile Has Fizzled

Seems like only yesterday When I was young and virile That was then, this is now My virile has long since fizzled Whatta shame we lose our virile But imagine someone at ninety Competing in a mile long foot race Running along in his nighty Don't laugh this surely can happen Our memories aren't the best Get dressed when the sun starts setting Strip when it peeks over the crest Sure ain't all it's cracked up to be These silly old golden years If it wasn't for Cathie, dearest Cathie I'd be writing from a home I fear! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Carol Eastman

Date: 3/3/2014 8:02:00 AM

No matter how the older years present themselves... Dragon says to tell you that: He is glad you are here, in any shape and form! I say don't waste it, A moment is a precious thing! We know, you are up to this, and a shaker and a mover... So shake your way to your own sweet Cathie, and start it with a kiss and a hug! Follow up in your own sweet way, before the day is over! Believe me! Dragon says he'd give you some pointers but remember he is 2. Blinging out a coloring book, may not be for you.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/3/2014 8:10:00 AM

Already done the 'kissy huggy thing'... do you think once is enough for today or should we do more of that stuff! WOOHOO! XOXOX

Jan Allison

Date: 3/2/2014 3:21:00 PM

lovely write dear brother Jack. Jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2014 4:09:00 PM

I knew what you meant dear brother lol. Long may you continue to be writing from the comfort of home Jan x

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/2/2014 4:02:00 PM

What the hell is "yje"??? Guess that should have been "the" DUH!

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/2/2014 3:48:00 PM

So far, so good sister Jan! Still writing from yje comforts of home! LOL Jack XOXOX

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/2/2014 9:15:00 AM

Your Cathie is a treasure....be good to her, dear!!! :) Hugs

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/2/2014 9:22:00 AM

Don't I know it!!! Loving hugs Kenny XOX

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/2/2014 8:40:00 AM

This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I doubt you've lost all your virility Jack! I really loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/2/2014 8:44:00 AM

If I still have it, don't know where it is! LOL

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/2/2014 8:11:00 AM

Wherever you'll be writing from..keep writing...One should never stop..But aw thankyou sweet Catie..Cause you're the braviest of all..A lovely tribute which puts a smile on my face.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/2/2014 8:25:00 AM

My dear Cathie thanks you for your concern! LOL She's the one that keeps me afloat! Loving hugs dearest Charmaine! XOXOX