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My Vines in Winter

Vines in the spring of my life were sturdy and spry. Utterly dependable, they ran along the many parts of my body. Able to cling to ligaments, tendons and muscles with great connectivity, they allowed me to walk, run, and jump with ease. How wonderful was my pain-free youth! Winter has arrived all too soon. The vines down my spine have lost some of their much-needed support. With hardship now, they move toward the joints of my left knee. My vines in winter have me out of kilter. No longer do they comfortably sprawl. No more can I joyfully jump or dance. Matching their apparent stagnation, I still try my best to keep c r e e p i n g a l o n g longing for the days when vines were green.

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Date: 3/4/2025 3:13:00 AM
Unique write dear poet, 'age' is a truth I never expected would reveal itself so soon, #metoo dear friend. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
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Date: 3/4/2025 1:46:00 AM
An excellent metaphor and a great take on Craig's prompt, I'm with you; congratulations
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Date: 2/18/2025 12:01:00 PM
Wonderful images that resonate with the changes our bodies make as we add more candles to our cake! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of comfort and relief to you!
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Date: 2/17/2025 10:00:00 AM
Nice metaphorical poem.
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Date: 2/17/2025 5:51:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Wow, your words really hit home and are so beautifully written, so deeply felt. The way you create the imagery of vines through youth and aging is just stunning. I felt every word. Keep creeping along, Andrea ,your words have a way of clinging to the heart. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/17/2025 10:42:00 AM
Well, I'm not really creeping yet, but I will be if I can't find a solution to my knee problem!! Thanks, Daniel.
Date: 2/17/2025 2:17:00 AM
Ahhh we seem to be in sync now, i just posted my take on this prompt too, I absolutely love how youv written this, in such a sincere and heartfelt manner, especially your lines “My vines in winter have me out of kilter. No longer do they comfortably sprawl. No more can I joyfully jump or dance.” I feel it how time and age can sometimes restrict us from doing what we love and how youv used winter for a season of age and time is soulful of you. Altho im not there i feel your emotions and i long for yesterday’s… a very touching poem! Best wishes always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/17/2025 10:42:00 AM
Not sure if it will be Craig's cup of tea. I don't know any other way to talk about vines. Let me check out yours.
Date: 2/16/2025 10:33:00 PM
beautiful and touching metaphor, you are not alone poet
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/17/2025 3:22:00 PM
sorry, Yann
Date: 2/16/2025 9:10:00 PM
A nice metaphor.Like the poem.
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Date: 2/16/2025 8:26:00 PM
I’m with you! Yikes!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/17/2025 10:40:00 AM
yikes to you too!!
Date: 2/16/2025 5:21:00 PM
I have a great respect for your age in time. You have described it in a lovely matter, but a f e e l i n g one. <3
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/16/2025 5:50:00 PM
Thanks. I was able to use my mini trampoline and work out easily until a year ago when gradually my left knee stopped working well. Dang. I am trying a Chiro. But I think eventually I will need to try medical doctor
Date: 2/16/2025 5:11:00 PM
Andrea, it's an interesting proposition. What are we made of and how does it keep working well? We are only beginning to discover some of the many mysteries. At least spring is around the corner. I hope you are feeling spry and enjoying every day!! Smiles!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/16/2025 5:51:00 PM
My mom and sisters have almost all had knee replacements. I am oldest sister and thought I was out of the woods. But what a decline I noticed since last year

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