Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

My Valentine No More

My Valentine No More

To you my EX. I want to say - that you
are now out of my way. The day you left,
my heart you broke. My heart was sad, but
time soon passed and now I'm glad.

I hope you found what you looked for. 
I hope you are happy, whereever you
go. I just hope you don't regret - my 
Valentine - you are no more.

to you on this day, I want to wish, that you
have a happy Valentine's Day. I won't forget
you, but you left and that's the reason - you 
are now my EX.... 

02/112/2014

Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Aejaz Zafar March 17, 2014 at 4:19 AM Great!!! I wish you find so much love that every single day is Valentines' Day for you!!! Thanks for sharing it with us. Love, Aejaz Lucilla Carrillo March 18, 2014 at 11:29 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem. I just wanted to write something different.

John Posey February 18, 2014 at 1:14 PM beautiful and emotional in the right direction. It really points to who is the winner and who loses.... Love ya ... Jake

Arthur Vaso February 15, 2014 at 10:20 PM A beautiful sad poem, so I shall wish you even one day late, a HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux February 15, 2014 at 9:18 AM I am glad to see someone write a valentine that speaks of more than the sweet side of the day. It is good that you still wish him happiness, that speaks of your true loving and worthy heart.

Bl Devnath February 15, 2014 at 8:25 AM One who leaves becomes ex but opposite one remains for all the time. Opposite one's heart is always great than the leaver. It's on the eve of Valentine Day, the prestige of valentine is surely maintained well. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Sara Kendrick February 13, 2014 at 5:58 PM A different kind of Valentine..Way to go..Did you send it ?..Thanks for the visit..Sara Lucilla Carrillo February 13, 2014 at 10:13 PM No I did not. It was just a poem. everyone always writes about love, but there are people that spend that day alone.

Robert Pettit February 13, 2014 at 4:11 PM I don't know him, but I'm sure you deserved better than him. Nice write for Valentine's Day. Lucilla Carrillo February 13, 2014 at 10:15 PM I think it should be dedicated to all the EX'S.

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2014 at 3:07 PM I bet he is not deserving of you, sweetie!! I hope you will have a marvelous valentine's day. good friends, grandkids, Valentines come in many forms! Lucilla Carrillo February 13, 2014 at 10:18 PM You are right. Valentine's day is not only for lovers. It's for friends too. I will enjoy my daughter and friends and eat a lot of candy... You have a great day too.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole February 13, 2014 at 4:41 AM This is so sweet Madam Lucilla! You wowed me all through the lines!! Well done!!!!! Lucilla Carrillo February 13, 2014 at 10:19 PM Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Russell Sivey February 12, 2014 at 9:17 PM This is a brilliant and a very well thought out write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem here this evening! What a glorious piece Lucilla, Great Work!! Lucilla Carrillo February 13, 2014 at 10:20 PM Thank you Russell and have a happy Valentine's day...

The Situation February 12, 2014 at 8:07 PM i have an Ex too. but she won't be getting this. she won't be getting anything but my far off respect of her privacy. good ridence. i would have never met April if you were around. Lucilla Carrillo February 13, 2014 at 10:22 PM Thanks for the read. There is a reason why they become EX's

Tim Smith February 12, 2014 at 6:46 PM Beautifully done Lucilla...The same for my ex as well.......Hugs Tim Lucilla Carrillo February 13, 2014 at 10:25 PM Thanks for for the visit and for liking my poem...