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My Valentine Gift

Kisses long and sweet A Valentine's Day promise Of much more to come -- Words of love written in rhyme Dinner will be late tonight. Dedicated to my husband. 2/6/12 For Andrea's Tanka My Valentine Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ~Andrea's~ "Tanka Your Valentine Gift" contest *Kim*. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/20/2012 2:55:00 PM

congrats on your 1st place win, that last line says it all! :-)

Kash Poet

Date: 2/20/2012 11:17:00 AM

This is just Excellent Kim.Congrats on your big win in ANDREA'S contest.

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/19/2012 3:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kim, love Elizabeth

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/19/2012 11:31:00 AM

Kim. Wonderful work, I like it when dinner's late :-). Congrats on placing on Andrea's winners list........................S.Ronthorpe

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/19/2012 8:37:00 AM

This seems to be written with a playful wink in the eye! I love it, Kim!! Congratulations!! I'm happy to share this spot with you! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/19/2012 6:12:00 AM

Congratulations, a smashing write and a deserving win xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2012 9:11:00 PM

congrats Kim on a wonderful first place win .. luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/18/2012 8:43:00 PM

hi, kim...rush hour, so here’s a generic greeting to you and the rest….loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2012 8:23:00 PM

Kim, this was SO GOOD. You were able to pack a lot of good stuff into your tanka and finish with one of the best ending lines ever. (Carrie, also at number one, gave the other great ending line) BIG congratulations on your number one win.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/8/2012 8:27:00 AM

hahaha, this is very sweet and entertaining, dear Kim. Hello from me! :) thanks for stopping by.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/7/2012 12:24:00 PM

This so cute Kim, absolutely enjoyed this dedication to your husband.. Wishing you the best for Andrea's contest ;) love Wilma

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/6/2012 5:14:00 PM

words of love writen in rhyme. now was that so hard to find? it sould'nt be when i've given you mine

John Loving Iii
Date: 2/6/2012 5:15:00 PM

thank you for your prayer. i felt so much better today. but getting better fast. john

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/6/2012 3:45:00 PM

a lovely sentiment with a wonderful last line. enjoy your late dinner (and all that comes before!)

Lebedyenko Berborodov

Date: 2/6/2012 2:03:00 PM

You are such a typical housewife.