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My Valentine Gift

Kisses long and sweet
A Valentine's Day promise
Of much more to come --
Words of love written in rhyme
Dinner will be late tonight.


Dedicated to my husband.


2/6/12 For Andrea's Tanka My Valentine Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/21/2012 5:34:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in ~Andrea's~ "Tanka Your Valentine Gift" contest *Kim*. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 2/20/2012 2:55:00 PM congrats on your 1st place win, that last line says it all! :-) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/20/2012 11:17:00 AM This is just Excellent Kim.Congrats on your big win in ANDREA'S contest. Login to Reply

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 2/19/2012 3:51:00 PM Congratulations on your win Kim, love Elizabeth Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/19/2012 11:31:00 AM Kim. Wonderful work, I like it when dinner's late :-). Congrats on placing on Andrea's winners list........................S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/19/2012 8:37:00 AM This seems to be written with a playful wink in the eye! I love it, Kim!! Congratulations!! I'm happy to share this spot with you! :) Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/19/2012 6:12:00 AM Congratulations, a smashing write and a deserving win xx Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/18/2012 9:11:00 PM congrats Kim on a wonderful first place win .. luv.. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/18/2012 8:43:00 PM hi, kim...rush hour, so here’s a generic greeting to you and the rest….loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/18/2012 8:23:00 PM Kim, this was SO GOOD. You were able to pack a lot of good stuff into your tanka and finish with one of the best ending lines ever. (Carrie, also at number one, gave the other great ending line) BIG congratulations on your number one win. Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 2/8/2012 8:27:00 AM hahaha, this is very sweet and entertaining, dear Kim. Hello from me! :) thanks for stopping by. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 2/7/2012 12:24:00 PM This so cute Kim, absolutely enjoyed this dedication to your husband.. Wishing you the best for Andrea's contest ;) love Wilma Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 2/6/2012 3:45:00 PM a lovely sentiment with a wonderful last line. enjoy your late dinner (and all that comes before!) Login to Reply

Lebedyenko Berborodov Date: 2/6/2012 2:03:00 PM You are such a typical housewife. Login to Reply