Kim Merryman Poet Tanka

My Valentine Gift

Kisses long and sweet
A Valentine's Day promise
Of much more to come --
Words of love written in rhyme
Dinner will be late tonight.


Dedicated to my husband.


2/6/12 For Andrea's Tanka My Valentine Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 21, 2012 at 5:34 AM Congratulations on your placement in ~Andrea's~ "Tanka Your Valentine Gift" contest *Kim*. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot February 20, 2012 at 2:55 PM congrats on your 1st place win, that last line says it all! :-)

Kash Poet February 20, 2012 at 11:17 AM This is just Excellent Kim.Congrats on your big win in ANDREA'S contest.

Lizanne Scholtz February 19, 2012 at 3:51 PM Congratulations on your win Kim, love Elizabeth

Samual Ronthorpe February 19, 2012 at 11:31 AM Kim. Wonderful work, I like it when dinner's late :-). Congrats on placing on Andrea's winners list........................S.Ronthorpe

Carrie Richards February 19, 2012 at 8:37 AM This seems to be written with a playful wink in the eye! I love it, Kim!! Congratulations!! I'm happy to share this spot with you! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 19, 2012 at 6:12 AM Congratulations, a smashing write and a deserving win xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 18, 2012 at 9:11 PM congrats Kim on a wonderful first place win .. luv..

Nette Onclaud February 18, 2012 at 8:43 PM hi, kim...rush hour, so here’s a generic greeting to you and the rest….loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2012 at 8:23 PM Kim, this was SO GOOD. You were able to pack a lot of good stuff into your tanka and finish with one of the best ending lines ever. (Carrie, also at number one, gave the other great ending line) BIG congratulations on your number one win.

Dinda Minardi February 8, 2012 at 8:27 AM hahaha, this is very sweet and entertaining, dear Kim. Hello from me! :) thanks for stopping by.

Wilma Neels February 7, 2012 at 12:24 PM This so cute Kim, absolutely enjoyed this dedication to your husband.. Wishing you the best for Andrea's contest ;) love Wilma

Ilene Bauer February 6, 2012 at 3:45 PM a lovely sentiment with a wonderful last line. enjoy your late dinner (and all that comes before!)

Lebedyenko Berborodov February 6, 2012 at 2:03 PM You are such a typical housewife.