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My Unique Line : Jsl -------A Day of Ones In the Sun---

Inundating radiant sunshine beams down on my face fervently tracing crows feet nearing the frown I can taste obliterating tear streaks transmitting them into the depths of outer space introducing an iridescent spectrum of piercing waves golden ears fear in the race Electromagnetic oscillation inspiring me to rely religiously upon solar energy photosynthesis eradicating unwanted toxins by chasing them vehemently So on this sacred date of "ONE"… negative energy is trumped by the positive tsunami of the sun and as she dares me to stare into her face of grace ninety three million miles away… I sigh as her radiance blasts my face in such a merciful way suddenly my shaking knees give way to an epiphany that this day is laced with sanctity Finally the world's eyes feast upon an auspicious uniformed alignment five ones standing side by side gold adorned a spiritual aspirant making change the world will see... "The Sun's Seven" pronouncing a unified spirituality
* Entrance for P.d.'s "Unique Line" Contest-----This poem's title is unique "A Day of Ones In the Sun" because it describes a very special and unique calendar date 11-1-1. But if you missed it... don't worry or let your eyes get blurry with tears cus' 11-11 's comin' in a hurry to relinquish your fears.....so yes there will be another day of ones on 11-11-1! tho' I can't promise you at the Soup that the 11th will be filled with sun!------I believe my poetry, like many others on this amazing site, has a fresh variety, inspired by life and everything in it! I hope you enjoy my lines like :"the world's eyes feast upon an auspicious uniformed alignment five ones standing side by side gold adorned a spiritual aspirant"

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Date: 11/7/2011 4:48:00 PM
I love the idea of a ' tsunami of the sun' flooding the earth with warmth... Remembrance Day coming up two minutes silence at 11:am 11/11/11 'lest we forget'...Margaret
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Date: 11/7/2011 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Hoiday Poem"contest Js. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Impressive Line"contest JS. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2011 10:28:00 PM
HELLO..JSL.. AGAIN ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:46:00 PM
JSL ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/5/2011 8:49:00 PM
I do remember this one. Congratulations, Joey, and I must make myself remember when the next one comes. That would be Friday, right? I LOVE Fridays. My fave day of the week.
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Date: 11/5/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congrats JS on another amazing win luv.. super awesome words for this holiday contest ...
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:00:00 AM
Congrats, Lamb. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 11/4/2011 12:00:00 AM
JSL ..a well done poem.. Double thanks for the smile.. Especially on my secret Poem... By the way very touching images... Well describe..I'm sorry to have to tell you this.. You won me over with the Auspicious..line.. I'm ready for the unity and aroma of the sun..the light that will be hissing on my face.. My fiance, calls me his Auspice. sO IT IS AN HONOR TO HAVE YOU ENTER MY CONTEST. I'm adding this to my favorite poems... I have a simple contest as well.. Please enter it, in both my contest... It wk be my delight.. P.d
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Date: 11/1/2011 7:38:00 PM
OH WOW, here I am someone who loves numerology and this one got RIGHT by me!! Also I adore the sun and letting it warm my face this way. This is marvelous. What an interesting topic and poem. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/1/2011 5:28:00 PM
and the beauty thing is in ten days we get something akin to a replay.. dig the po as usual, JSL the esquire, namaste~N
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