My Two Cars

My Two Cars The end of the week I feel weak and meek I struggle to survive Burdened, wish I could die Christmas is near I am in fear With only eight fifty left after rent Never more wisely have I been forced and spent The dollar store There they were Two hot wheels cars and only one dollar each One more dollar for wrapping, and a fiver left for food My eyes laden with sadness The future looked bleak As I hugged little Adam Daycare over, I took him from the Madame Now with five dollars, in my purse I bought some Mac and cheese A candy and apple Some juice and small snacks On Christmas I woke My son at my bed Santa came he shouted, “momma”, he really came!! So up we went peeking under the tree Two Hot wheel cars wrapped neat as could be He unwrapped them with smiles He shouted with glee Santa got all this just for me!!! I know nothing of Cars A single mum in struggles When I saw my boys’ eyes light up Tears began to bubble
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White Avatar
May 18, 2017 at 12:46 PM
This made me smile and cry the same time.
A   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 1:26 AM
Thank you for the wonderful reply
Wigley Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Reminded me of my childhood, when my parents struggled similarly. A very moving but sweet write, Aurore, and more importantly, full of love. Viv x
Severo Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Peace and love right back xoxoxoxoxox
Pinet Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:32 PM
The words are bubbly and full of life and bravado. The message is clear and meaningful to both heart and soul. The words are gentle and the hurt is real...leaving a feeling of calm acceptance of life's struggles, yet speaks of the determination needed to rise above it. Emile.
Severo Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:50 PM
So sweet to say this, thank you xoxoxoxoxoxox
Allison Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 6:28 PM
A very touching write Aurore this really tugged at the heartstrings congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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February 12, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Thank you Jan, your poems always bring to me great big smiles and happiness, xoxo peace and love
A  Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:38 PM
Hello Aurore, Congrats on your win. Love *SKAT*
Severo Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Thank you Skat xoxoxoxoxox
A   Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Aurore, :) Congratulations on your awesome win. ""You showed me yours-- now's my turn to show you mine --- LADIES"" Stop by my latest blog if you'd like. I have no poem to share under this topic. In which you wrote bravely. I'd like to share photos of my BUDDY (car).......... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Severo Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:47 PM
Thank you, I am just learning here and I had fun with contest. xoxoxoxoxox
Sergi Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Hi Aurore: very intense with a happy ending. beautiful . I happy that Adam is happy!
Sergi Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Hi Aurore: very intense with a happy ending. beautiful . I happy that Adam is happy!
Severo Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:46 PM
thank you xoxoxox peace and love
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 11:28 AM
You have expressed a sad reality that many are insulated from. Hugs Rick.
Severo Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:08 AM
Thank you xoxoxo peace and love
Nance Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Wow, this brought tears to my eyes, I know what that struggle is, oh such a sweet lil one to appreciate ... aww I just want to hug ya'll
Severo Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:08 AM
I find comfort knowing people understand, thanks sis
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