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My Twenty Fifth Christmas

My twenty fifth Christmas arrived with grief. Snowflakes and anguish transcended belief. My mother’s fifty sixth year would be her last. Stage four had arrived, embittered and fast. Engaging moments were invariably made. Our last family Christmas was splendidly played. No sibling rivalry, not one single rift. I couldn’t have wished for a finer Christmas gift. There was tinsel and lights, stockings hung with care. The smell of freshly baked bread filled the air. Christmas music played; we gave Mom our best. That year was tops, better than all the rest. Six weeks later, I watched my mother die. It’s been twenty-five years, I still hurt and cry. Merry Christmas Mom, in my heart you will forever stay. I will always treasure God’s gift that I received on Christmas day. 12/4/21 A Christmas Gift Memory Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 3/15/2022 7:50:00 PM
Very beautifully written!
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Date: 12/27/2021 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mark! A truly heart-touching poem. This no doubt deserved first place. <3 ~Anna
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Date: 12/27/2021 7:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mark, with this most heart-felt poem
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Date: 12/27/2021 9:41:00 AM
Dear Mark, Congratulations on your win. What a heartwarming story you have shared with us~may the warm memories you have give you comfort. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 12/26/2021 5:00:00 PM
Mark, this epic imagery captures sentiments and moments we all can identify with. So well crafted.
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Date: 12/26/2021 2:58:00 PM
"My Twenty Fifth Christmas" is a wonderful write and tribute to your mom. I love your line, "It’s been twenty-five years, I still hurt and cry." Somethings last forever. Sorry for your hurt/pain. Have a Blessed Day............
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Date: 12/26/2021 3:14:00 AM
Great experience-sharing. Mother's death, indeed, is a painful memory. Great couplets. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/26/2021 2:53:00 AM
Tears are a gift. Poignant write. Congratulations on the win and all the best for 2022. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 12/25/2021 9:38:00 PM
Such a touching Christmas memory. Thus you manged to give the best Christmas gift to your dying mother ! May her memory ignite your life. Congratulations on your well deserved win Mark!
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Date: 12/25/2021 3:15:00 PM
Ah, you made me shed a tear on Christmas day, I can only imagine the turmoil that went on inside of you that day, dear Mark, I pray that with the passing of the years, her memory brings about more smiles then tears. Love and prayers, are being send, xo congrats
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Date: 12/25/2021 9:03:00 AM
A great piece of poetry filled with strong bittersweet emotions both happy and sad, a testament to the love you hold for your mother. Well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 12/24/2021 10:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, with your beautiful, moving tribute to your Mom, Mark. I'm so glad that your family got to share that lasting, precious gift of a wonderful Christmas together. Happy holidays, Evelyn
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/25/2021 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, merry Christmas!
Date: 12/24/2021 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful verse ,Mark very well deserved. Merry, Merry Christmas my friend
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/24/2021 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Eve! Merry Christmas my friend!
Date: 12/24/2021 6:38:00 PM
This is so beautiful Mark, your mother must gaze from heaven and be so very blessed by you. What a beautiful gift of priceless treasure, this amazing poem. I so felt your heart that it was impossible not to weep while reading it. God bless you. Merry Christmas, and prayers that you and your family are blessed with health and much joy in the coming year. Thank you for entering your poem in my contest. I am so blessed by it. It is a first place win, it is a first class poem <3
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/24/2021 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much!! What a nice thing to say, thank you for inspiring me to write that. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Date: 12/5/2021 2:32:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Mark, I'm happy that you were all able to enjoy her last Christmas with you. I always find Christmas an emotional time when you think of those no longer with us. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/5/2021 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Tom! Emotional indeed, if we are fortunate enough we will have many great memories to get us through.
Date: 12/4/2021 10:07:00 PM
Like the famous quote on death and taxes. We all have to go. On my wife's birthday, her father died. But we are always consoled. Memories we hold dear to or hearts. Your mother is now at peace and you will never forget her gift.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/5/2021 7:02:00 AM
It’s all about making fond memories. One of our greatest gifts is memory.
Date: 12/4/2021 9:20:00 PM
Beautifully-written and so touching, Mark. Thanks so much for sharing. Many of us will be remembering our last Christmas with our mothers, particularly because of your poem. A wonderful response.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/5/2021 7:01:00 AM
What a wonderful thing to say, thank you!

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