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10/14/2024 for My Truths Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

My Truths


                        When I was a little boy, 
            I hunted down frogs, trying to catch them, 
but just before I nabbed them, they would hop away. 
Could it be, maybe, it is the same with truth? 
                        I cannot hope to catch it.
It's an elusive mystery, ever to evade my searching grasp, 
and it cannot be found outside, but only exists internally. 
      It may not be the truth others try to impose - 
            although they may live by their own gospel. 
                        No, my guide comes from inside, 
and what is true today, may not be true tomorrow. 
            What is true for me, may not be for you. 
      I abandon the quest for truth, 
                        and leave fleeting frogs free, finding faith inside.
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Kendrick Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. There are some truths that are true, valuable and right always. The Bible tells us truths that are true today and forever. Thanks for sharing a little about yourself with us. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Sara!
La France Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 11:30 AM
David, congrats on your win in my contest, like the poem, well done, blessings Constance
Crandall Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Thanks Constance!
Jones Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest for this gem David.
Crandall Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 9:12 AM
Hi Karen - thanks!
Poteet Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Great thoughts here, David which men have pondered throughout time and place. Perceived "truth" is why there are so many differing religions in the world. Absolute "truth" on the other hand has to be the truth that one puts his faith and trust and soul into. Thanks for sharing; best of luck in the competition.
Crandall Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 6:27 PM
Thanks Reason. That sounds "reason"able. :-)
Gifford Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 9:56 PM
A great write David, and good luck with the competition. Have a great day.
Crandall Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Zyrool!
Slaughter Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 2:04 PM
That's the problem with "truth"...it can be enlightening...or devastating. A great piece, David.
Crandall Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 6:28 PM
Thanks Jim! I would say that's true. Honestly, sometimes I don't want to know the truth.
Empress Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Wow youv written a very wise and honest poem for this theme! I agree with “ and what is true today, may not be true tomorrow. What is true for me, may not be for you. ” couldnt have said it any better. Sometimes truth, is perceived as one thinks, it all varies! What a profound and deeply moving poem! I love this! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always!
Crandall Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Thanks for the light, Ink Empress, sending light back to you as well :-)
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