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My Trip Journey

Written: July 11, 2024 For Constance La France Contest Quote: Take a few minutes of every day to fantasize about how you would wander, travel, or explore if you could. By Poet ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ On a sea of lights, we reached Dubai. Urban journey thrills the mind and feeling. to travel across the world. through whirling clouds over the oceans so blue. To arrive at my goal and be with you. What more could I want from my summer trip? Rustling leaves, hazy air, and a lush woodland. All is halcyon: the clouds above me whirl. My blood has thawed, and my heart feels warm. The declining sun fades like a sinking ship. turning warmth and light into silence. The owl reveals her nighttime reign. Underground squirrels ran away. lives and hearts in ecstasy neither gold nor diamonds do I desire my family's faces set my heart afire forfeit your tinsel and adorned trees your hearty welcome and smiles have your parties ready to dance Tomorrow is a gift and you're a pandit My love is yours; blast your trumpet.
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Date: 7/17/2024 5:22:00 AM
Woo hoo! I love this!! Fav!xo
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Date: 7/15/2024 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write/quote/great picture. Life is a journey...  Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win. A lively poem that deserves such high placement.
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Date: 7/12/2024 8:16:00 PM
Poem of adventure and romance, that sets a mood for eternal friendship. It has lively pictures of animals that pique my interest. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 7/12/2024 10:14:00 AM
Nice poem. All that glitters is not gold, specially in Dubai.
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Date: 7/12/2024 4:41:00 AM
exhilarating work, sotto...well done for all the finery that is Dubai!
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