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"Like branches of a rooted, sturdy tree a family survives, each limb entwined." __by Poet Huge fragmented spaces fill my mind and heart with unbalances that sadden my world- for as I gaze upon those branches- I now find the truth they show, as time passed by has unfurled. The fruit upon this old tree- one time was sweet and lush as it could be; but, forever staying firm as such- is not a guarantee. Oh, family tree, when I was young, we'd all share thriving on these varied branches- bound with care; now just your names are there. Your beings- once whole with life- rest in death confined. Now fragmented spaces full of memories I do keep impearled. Extended family, long ago, loved me- Grandparents, parents, uncles, aunts; my love- still declare. July 14, 2021 ~1st Place~ Contest: Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces Sponsor: Constance La France Jusfws: 08/13/2021

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Date: 8/17/2021 8:14:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look marvelous, well done. I love your image quote and your invented quotation, yes, the leaves on familty tree branches grow bare in time ~Constance
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Date: 8/13/2021 9:07:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest . Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:07:00 AM
A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
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