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My Trash Can Home

Why was I put in the trash,                                               unloved and unwanted.                                                  Were you young,
unloved yourself.                                                               
A life to live among the garbage,                                      with just a rag as a blanket.                                            Wet and cold I did lay,
hoping for a brighter day.                                               A small life found,                                                         a small life not forgotten.                                                A life to grow,                                                                a life to be loved.                                                            Why was I put in the trash,                                              I will never know.                                                          What has this taught me,                                                to love myself and others everyday.

Date Written: 2/2/2021                                                  Break My Heart, Why Don't Cha Poetry Contest                Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

NOTE: Not A True Story, Just A Write........

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 2/8/2021 10:02:00 PM Some have started out in the trash, no idea how anyone can do it. So thank you for addressing these little ones. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/9/2021 1:30:00 PM Thank You, for reading and for writing. It is a sad thing. Enjoy your day blessings...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/5/2021 10:21:00 PM Children are our treasure and our joy. They should all be cherished. I loved the ending to this stirring poem, Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/6/2021 6:28:00 AM Thanks for writing. You are so right when you say, "Children are our treasure and our joy. They should all be cherished." Glad you like the way I ended it. Have a wonderful and blessed day/weekend...............

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/5/2021 11:44:00 AM Certainly tugs the heart to hear the voice of a child.. aching. Emotive write, Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/5/2021 12:53:00 PM Thanks for writing. Glad you like this. Yes, it was an emotional write even if it is not true and just a write. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings...............

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/4/2021 1:42:00 PM this DOES happen to some poor babies with stupid mothers. The least they could do is leave them at a church or legally put for adoption. Well done for the contest. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/5/2021 12:50:00 PM Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, you are so right, "leave them at a church or legally put for adoption." Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings............

Robert Pettit Date: 2/4/2021 12:00:00 PM Reminds me a little of the hit song "Love Child" by the Supremes. Good write! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/4/2021 12:54:00 PM Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. "Love Child" is a good song. Enjoy your day with blessings............

JCB Brul Date: 2/3/2021 3:42:00 PM Such an emotive piece that most of us can correlate. Nicely-penned Paula.Best wishes in the contest.. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/4/2021 12:53:00 PM Thanks for writing and for your best wishes in the contest. Glad you like this write. Enjoy your day with blessings............

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 2/3/2021 3:40:00 AM Why and how can anybody put someone in trash. Great write on harsh reality of life. Sad but true. Ending superb. Hardship make you emphatic. All the best for contest Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/3/2021 7:11:00 AM Thanks for writing, for your kind words and best wishes for contest. Yes, so sad but true. Life can be cruel. Not A True Story, Just A Write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/2/2021 7:42:00 PM A sad way to start a life. The treasure found in the trash... Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/3/2021 7:03:00 AM Thanks for writing. Yes, a sad and hard way to start a life. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Heidi Sands Date: 2/2/2021 1:45:00 PM A poem that can make anyone think deeply about such incidents. So sad and compelling. Well done :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/3/2021 7:00:00 AM Thanks for writing. Yes, so sad and compelling. Have a blessed day writing away............................

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/2/2021 1:06:00 PM - I have heard several such stories from reality ... it is heartbreaking to think about, Paula - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/3/2021 6:58:00 AM Thanks for writing. Yes, so sad and heartbreaking. Have a blessed day writing away with hugs..............

Jo Chamberlain Date: 2/2/2021 1:03:00 PM Sadly something I can relate to, being in care & homeless as child. You done your poem justice. I enjoyed the read. Joanna Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/3/2021 6:57:00 AM Thanks for writing and for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/2/2021 12:42:00 PM Sadly a story you often hear about Paula, hope you are well and good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/2/2021 12:51:00 PM Thanks for writing and for your good luck. I am blessed. Hope you are safe and OK. Have a blessed day writing away..............