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My Touch Her Kiss

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For some anomalous raison d’être
       the lively in hern watch
              was resolute
                   thus
           mine did ensue

           And each from I
                mine lips
            that was touch 

         Though I do know
  it materialized in hern vista
             ‘As the kiss’
               
  I kissed her neverhernless
              in lexical
                verse
      to mine grave I say
          to mine grave
               "touch"

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity Date: 8/19/2011 2:10:00 AM A passionate Master piece.....this is great....thanks for sharing....smiles.....Chiquita Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/11/2011 7:01:00 AM wow! James,,., how are you? And yes this time I missed you and alot of other poets. I sure missed your poetry as well, glad to have stopped by take care,..p.d. Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 7/7/2011 6:12:00 AM The kiss!!! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/2/2011 11:06:00 AM Mr. Romance or should I call you Mr. Passion?? I just love this James.. Hope your weekend will be a great one, love Wilma Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 6/30/2011 7:01:00 PM Ahhh passion, french words whispered in the ear this sounds interesting ha ha ahhhh. love phyl Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/30/2011 6:33:00 PM u might enjoy Feeling U luv my hotty Tanka ..matching your touch and kiss luv..oh wow.. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/30/2011 12:21:00 PM james, got more?.. i'm raring to read you! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/23/2011 5:41:00 PM ahhhhh rrooooooomance! speak more french this time to me ;) Loved it! Light & Love Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 6/23/2011 10:53:00 AM A work of rare lexial passion. Did I use the word right? I will go to my grave trying to figure this one out. Nevertheless! A noble write, Sir James. Give me credit for trying. LOve, daver Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/23/2011 9:53:00 AM Thank you for your sweet comments, James. I miss you as well and we should talk soon. MRI results are in and I have physical therapy on the agenda. Prayers are welcome. Love you, dear friend. Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/23/2011 8:22:00 AM ah James was looking to read a new fiery piece from u luv.. your titles are inspiring me to write more luv poetry..hoping u have a wonderful week and weekend my friend and partner in poetry ..oh.... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/22/2011 10:53:00 PM just rereading this one,James. I really love the ending, to mine grave!!! (oh, geez, I just looked below and saw Nikko said the very same thing!!!) Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/22/2011 8:38:00 PM This sure is a lovely read, James and I just totally liked how you ended this one... keep on writing your gems :) and thank you for passing by my poem :D Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/20/2011 11:21:00 PM HI, James. It was nice to hear from you the other day. WHat an interesting turn of phrase here: kiss in a lexial verse! Unique! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/20/2011 6:26:00 AM soulful to say the least, james.. nice side of you! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/16/2011 9:01:00 PM one powerful kiss can speak volumes of luv James.. a beautifully constructed poem full of emotional tempt... lingering thoughts on that kiss..the start of a beautiful evening my friend.. luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/16/2011 3:01:00 PM So beautiful, James. I love the way the lips touch and a "kiss" materializes. Much love to you, my friend. (Always need a cold shower after reading your poetry.) Carolyn Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 6/15/2011 11:11:00 PM Another great post from a wonderful soul with a loving heart! Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 6/15/2011 7:52:00 PM well James you wrote a beautiful piece of poetry, you out did your self on this beautiful write, really enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on Warm Breezes. Login to Reply