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My Tiny Wee Brain

In spite of my tiny wee brain I can still rhyme a simple refrain Here's what I “mean” The sky is “green” WOW! That was quite a brain strain © Jack Ellison 2015

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Tim Smith

Date: 11/6/2015 3:44:00 PM

Settle down now I see all the smoke...dont blow up your head just for a joke...take your time...to perfect your rhyme....oh, it's a peace pipe, can I have a toke

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/6/2015 3:47:00 PM

Are you asking for a truce??? LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/6/2015 3:10:00 PM

Roses are red... Violets are blue... The sky is green... Now his brain is black and blue?... Naw! I don't think that's true... Go LimmerJack! We're onto you! LOL...

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/6/2015 3:38:00 PM

If it doesn't rhyme, make it! LOL xoxox

Lin Lane

Date: 11/6/2015 7:56:00 AM

take it easy, Jack... you don't want to use up all those brain cells writing witty limericks.

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/6/2015 8:04:00 AM

Thanks for the warning... I sometimes get carried away! Methinks sometimes I should be carried away!!! Love, Santa xxx