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My Time For Peace

Sand and blue sea sing to my soul.

Up in the sky the sun smiles.

Now is my time for peace.

Boats drift past the beach

As I drift with

Them till the

Hush of

Eve. 


 A short one For the 101 in a row (off the bad wagon) 191Poetry Contest of PD

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/26/2015 1:41:00 AM

Loved the almost rush of this, that runs into the lulling 'hush' good thoughts evoked here Andrea..'

Skat A

Date: 10/19/2015 11:27:00 PM

Andrea, Congrats on your win. --SKAT :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/18/2015 3:50:00 PM

Peaceful words and thoughts, Andrea. Congrats on your fine win. Sandra

Jack Horne

Date: 10/18/2015 3:03:00 PM

ahhhh, lovely

Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/17/2015 2:19:00 PM

Very nice Andrea, Congrats!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/17/2015 6:57:00 AM

Lovely! Congrats Andrea!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/17/2015 3:00:00 AM

I adore this sweet write. It is captivating. Congratulations ... CayCay

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/17/2015 1:26:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Andrea!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 1:08:00 AM

Very nice write and a big win congratulations.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/16/2015 8:46:00 PM

Hi Andrea: Beautiful settings, sky, blue sea, sun and beach. Congratulations!

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/16/2015 8:39:00 PM

Such a wonderful setting described in a few well chosen words, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2015 8:02:00 PM

One can smile, thinking of a walk along the sea. (How I wish I were there!) Lovely poem, Andrea......this was a challenge to use one syllable words, but you nailed it!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/16/2015 5:45:00 PM

trust the sun worshipper to write of sunbathing! haha nice 's' alliteration (maybe i would've liked to see sky rather than air - just a thought) a relaxing, soothing piece - i'm nearly dropping off just reading it! - and a nice note to go out on, paired with george seal's poem - congrats on your win in my contest!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2015 5:00:00 PM

Andrea, you have penned a beautiful picture.Congratulations your win:-)Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2015 4:36:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Walker

Date: 10/14/2015 8:47:00 PM

Beautiful flow of words.

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/14/2015 6:55:00 PM

Petal,this is my favourite activity, errrm if thats the right description lol. I is a sun lover but rarely have the time to indulge, but this poem has set me up for the coming winter lol. Take care, Richard

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/14/2015 6:29:00 PM

Oh, but that is beautiful! I must look this contest up - one syllable words - oh, my. Your efforts really paid off, so much impact from those words ... CayCay

Daver Austin

Date: 10/14/2015 11:02:00 AM

I'm kicking up sand right along with you. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2015 3:26:00 AM

- Perfect peace, Andrea - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/13/2015 10:28:00 PM

Very clever sue of form. In Brooklyn we invented the 9 1 1 form but poetrysoup won't recognize it. Try one - they are fun! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/13/2015 4:33:00 PM

Makes me want to say...."ahhhhh" !! Nicely done!!