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My Time For Peace

Sand and blue sea sing to my soul.

Up in the sky the sun smiles.

Now is my time for peace.

Boats drift past the beach

As I drift with

Them till the

Hush of

Eve. 


 A short one For the 101 in a row (off the bad wagon) 191Poetry Contest of PD

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Joe Maverick

October 26, 2015 at 1:41 AM

Loved the almost rush of this, that runs into the lulling 'hush' good thoughts evoked here Andrea..'

Skat A

October 19, 2015 at 11:27 PM

Andrea, Congrats on your win. --SKAT :)

Sandra Haight

October 18, 2015 at 3:50 PM

Peaceful words and thoughts, Andrea. Congrats on your fine win. Sandra

Jack Horne

October 18, 2015 at 3:03 PM

ahhhh, lovely

Edward Ebbs

October 17, 2015 at 2:19 PM

Very nice Andrea, Congrats!

Balveen Cheema

October 17, 2015 at 6:57 AM

Lovely! Congrats Andrea!

CayCay Godwin

October 17, 2015 at 3:00 AM

I adore this sweet write. It is captivating. Congratulations ... CayCay

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 17, 2015 at 1:26 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Andrea!

Michael Tor

October 17, 2015 at 1:08 AM

Very nice write and a big win congratulations.

Ralph Sergi

October 16, 2015 at 8:46 PM

Hi Andrea: Beautiful settings, sky, blue sea, sun and beach. Congratulations!

Laura Leiser

October 16, 2015 at 8:39 PM

Such a wonderful setting described in a few well chosen words, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)

Carrie Richards

October 16, 2015 at 8:02 PM

One can smile, thinking of a walk along the sea. (How I wish I were there!) Lovely poem, Andrea......this was a challenge to use one syllable words, but you nailed it!

Charlotte Puddifoot

October 16, 2015 at 5:45 PM

trust the sun worshipper to write of sunbathing! haha nice 's' alliteration (maybe i would've liked to see sky rather than air - just a thought) a relaxing, soothing piece - i'm nearly dropping off just reading it! - and a nice note to go out on, paired with george seal's poem - congrats on your win in my contest!

Alexis Y.

October 16, 2015 at 5:00 PM

Andrea, you have penned a beautiful picture.Congratulations your win:-)Alexis

Jan Allison

October 16, 2015 at 4:36 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Walker

October 14, 2015 at 8:47 PM

Beautiful flow of words.

Richard D Seal

October 14, 2015 at 6:55 PM

Petal,this is my favourite activity, errrm if thats the right description lol. I is a sun lover but rarely have the time to indulge, but this poem has set me up for the coming winter lol. Take care, Richard

CayCay Godwin

October 14, 2015 at 6:29 PM

Oh, but that is beautiful! I must look this contest up - one syllable words - oh, my. Your efforts really paid off, so much impact from those words ... CayCay