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My poem was also inspired by a song I love: Katy Perry's Roar video. If you have not seen the video, you should watch it. It's so cool!!  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CevxZvSJLk8

 

Walking my tiger home, I now feel happy to be alive. Out in the sun, I’m a charmed one - someone who learned to survive! It wasn’t easy when I first found myself near the jungle lost after I’d landed on a white beach, my ship having been storm-tossed. I must have lain for nearly two days unconscious on the sand, then woke in tall grass and looked all around. Who’d given the helping hand? No one was there. How was it then I’d gotten so far from shore? As I sat thinking, there came toward me four monkeys and then one more! Poking at me, like humans they seemed, chattering gaily away. I rose to my feet. One jumped on my back. A game he wanted to play! Then out of nowhere, something appeared, giving me quite a start. A cat, but a giant, orange and with black stripes. My pounding heart! A tiger this was, and in his big teeth, he held part of my clothes. He looked at me with eyes strangely sweet while to the spot I froze! He crept up to me, and then what he did, I never will forget. He rubbed his large head right over mine. as if he were my pet! It took me some time, but then at last, I came to understand. I would be friends with many creatures here in this jungle land. Like Tarzan am I, talking with them, And when I want to eat, The monkeys bring fruits, since I can’t stomach The tiger’s uncooked meat. I sleep snuggled up by my sweetest friend, and daily we walk about. Holding his tail, I follow behind. For me, that tiger looks out! This jungle’s my home. And I confess here’s the reality: I am the pet, and it’s my tiger actually walking ME! July 23, 2016 for the "Walking My Tiger Home" contest of David Lindsay

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Date: 8/17/2016 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your win ... A superb write as usual ...
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Date: 8/16/2016 4:00:00 PM
A very cute story-poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/16/2016 2:52:00 PM
I'm sure kids would love this poem as much as I did ... its such a fun write:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/16/2016 2:38:00 PM
...and back again with warm congratulations, Andrea. Viv x
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Date: 8/16/2016 1:01:00 PM
Andrea, so cute! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/16/2016 12:28:00 PM
Great idea. Congrats on your write.:) Sunita
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Date: 7/29/2016 4:07:00 AM
Perfect poem with allegories!
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Date: 7/28/2016 9:44:00 AM
Make sure your tiger master is well fed or he/she (you didn't say) may have more than walking in mind. ;-)
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Date: 7/28/2016 8:46:00 AM
Now we know who Jane is!...Very nicely written Andrea....
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Date: 7/27/2016 4:12:00 PM
Delightful, Andrea, your imagination soared on this one and completely delighted me. What a great ending. 4th L, 4th S, monkeys? Plural. I know this will be well received by all who read it. Would be great for kids, too. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 7/27/2016 1:04:00 AM
HA ha! Loved this one, Andrea:) Great story:) Can't beat this one:)
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Date: 7/26/2016 5:19:00 PM
Amazing story telling Andrea. No wonder you are top of the heap.
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:59:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I love that song and I love this poem. I'm sure it will be on the list. Good luck in the contest. A gigantic seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2016 8:48:00 AM
Loved it, great story and imagery.
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Date: 7/25/2016 6:49:00 PM
Wonderful Story Andrea...reminds me kind of the jungle book.
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Date: 7/25/2016 12:57:00 PM
You are Miss Tarzan i feel here. Beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest. hugs, bl
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:06:00 AM
Fantastic read! Took me back those old Tarzan movies! Good luck on contest Andrea!
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Date: 7/25/2016 6:58:00 AM
Great write, Andrea! A delight for all to read from the youngest to the oldest. Good luck in the contest. ...Fran
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Date: 7/25/2016 6:36:00 AM
Wow..This is great.. Beautiful imagery Andrea... I just loved it... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 7/25/2016 6:12:00 AM
Enjoyed your write, Andrea, you'd make a great Mowgli. Or should that be Jane? Or Jana of the Jungle? Good luck in the comp,Viv x
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Date: 7/25/2016 5:51:00 AM
Delightfully didactic dear, Andrea! Enjoyed it!
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Date: 7/25/2016 2:17:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Date: 7/25/2016 1:53:00 AM
A tiger by the tail....I love the referee Andrea. You can create a poem from any subject, so brava on this one! You did well! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:59:00 PM
Great!
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:06:00 PM
What a great read, enjoyed every line. good luck in the contest.
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