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My poem was also inspired by a song I love: Katy Perry's Roar video. If you have not seen the video, you should watch it. It's so cool!!  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CevxZvSJLk8

 

My Tiger and Me

Walking my tiger home, I now feel
happy to be alive.
Out in the sun, I’m a charmed one -
someone who learned to survive!

It wasn’t easy when I first found
myself near the jungle lost
after I’d landed on a white beach,
my ship having been storm-tossed.

I must have lain for nearly two days
unconscious on the sand,
then woke in tall grass and looked all around.
Who’d given the helping hand?

No one was there. How was it then
I’d gotten so far from shore?
As I sat thinking, there came toward me
four monkeys and then one more!

Poking at me, like humans they seemed,
chattering gaily away.
I rose to my feet. One jumped on my back.
A game he wanted to play!

Then out of nowhere, something appeared,
giving me quite a start.
A cat, but a giant, orange and with
black stripes. My pounding heart!

A tiger this was, and in his big teeth,
he held part of my clothes.
He looked at me with eyes strangely sweet
while to the spot I froze!

He crept up to me, and then what he did,
I never will forget.
He rubbed his large head right over mine.
as if he were my pet!

It took me some time, but then at last,
I came to understand.
I would be friends with many creatures
here in this jungle land.

Like Tarzan am I, talking with them,
And when I want to eat,
The monkeys bring fruits, since I can’t stomach
The tiger’s uncooked meat.

I sleep snuggled up by my sweetest friend,
and daily we walk about.
Holding his tail, I follow behind.
For me, that tiger looks out!

This jungle’s my home. And I confess
here’s the reality:
I am the pet, and it’s my tiger
actually walking ME!

 July 23, 2016 for the "Walking My Tiger Home" contest of David Lindsay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your win ... A superb write as usual ...
Haight Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:00 PM
A very cute story-poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:52 PM
I'm sure kids would love this poem as much as I did ... its such a fun write:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:38 PM
...and back again with warm congratulations, Andrea. Viv x
Scars Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Andrea, so cute! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Great idea. Congrats on your write.:) Sunita
Gitas Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 4:07 AM
Perfect poem with allegories!
Arnone Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Make sure your tiger master is well fed or he/she (you didn't say) may have more than walking in mind. ;-)
May Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Now we know who Jane is!...Very nicely written Andrea....
Godwin Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Delightful, Andrea, your imagination soared on this one and completely delighted me. What a great ending. 4th L, 4th S, monkeys? Plural. I know this will be well received by all who read it. Would be great for kids, too. Love ... CayCay
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 1:04 AM
HA ha! Loved this one, Andrea:) Great story:) Can't beat this one:)
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Amazing story telling Andrea. No wonder you are top of the heap.
Y. Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Hi Andrea, I love that song and I love this poem. I'm sure it will be on the list. Good luck in the contest. A gigantic seven:-) Alexis
Garcia Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Loved it, great story and imagery.
Smith Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Wonderful Story Andrea...reminds me kind of the jungle book.
Devnath  Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 12:57 PM
You are Miss Tarzan i feel here. Beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest. hugs, bl
Heemstra Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Fantastic read! Took me back those old Tarzan movies! Good luck on contest Andrea!
Grasso Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Great write, Andrea! A delight for all to read from the youngest to the oldest. Good luck in the contest. ...Fran
Kannan Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 6:36 AM
Wow..This is great.. Beautiful imagery Andrea... I just loved it... Good luck in the contest...
Wigley Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 6:12 AM
Enjoyed your write, Andrea, you'd make a great Mowgli. Or should that be Jane? Or Jana of the Jungle? Good luck in the comp,Viv x
Trifiatis Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 5:51 AM
Delightfully didactic dear, Andrea! Enjoyed it!
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Wonderful!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 1:53 AM
A tiger by the tail....I love the referee Andrea. You can create a poem from any subject, so brava on this one! You did well! 7 ; )
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Great!
Kent Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:06 PM
What a great read, enjoyed every line. good luck in the contest.
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