My Throbbing Ache

I crave for you like grass does in a drought, 
My lips hunger for the taste of your lips. 
I’ll love you forever don't ever doubt,
When we met, it was a full moon eclipse.

I ache for you when you are not with me,
You are my sunshine after a long night.
Being in your arms fills my soul with glee,
Your touch sends me high; a sensual flight.

Only you can quench my soul’s aching thirst,
Come to me, my love; satisfy this throb.
If you don't appease my desire, I'll burst, 
Sweetheart, your soft kisses will do the job.


My darling, I lie here, my being shakes,
I need your cure; to rid me of my aches.


    04-23-2021
    Contest: Ache
Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Alexis, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your wonderful Sonnet poem on the ache of love, well done, love _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 3:01 PM
very nicely done, my friend. I enjoyed your rhyming verse. Congrats.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Back with congratulations Alexis on your win with this delightful write... Belle :-)
Poet Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 2:19 PM
Hi Again Alexis, and congratulations on your great contest win; you really deserve it, have a great rest of your day// hugs Lasaad
Evans Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 1:54 PM
So, so romantic with sensuality. Superb! Congrats.
Romios Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Hi Alexis A and powerful. I love the emotion you shared Thanks and best wishes. Pangie xx
Gelok Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 7:24 AM
I enjoyed reading this 'Sonnet'. as a new poet I appreciate see different styles (sonnet) since I am just realizing the difference in poetry. Great piece.
Poet Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 3:41 AM
A superb lovely write, Alexis, such a top take on the theme of ache, I wish you good luck, warm hugs Alexis
Buhagiar Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 1:07 AM
The ache of love. Pity you missed my effort on the subject. Maybe something wrong with the soup!
Mcintosh Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Lovely sonnet. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 5:39 PM
aww so beautiful full of romance , such a super take on the ache theme:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 22, 2021 at 5:01 PM
A wonderful loving write as always Alexis, so in love are you two... Belle :-)
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