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My thoughts on you

My thoughts on you......... When I walk alone on the beach while the sun set across the ocean my desires for your love brings me lots of pleasure and leave with a great thoughts on you My inner heart mounts with your warmth thoughts and tides with our emotions flow even we are apart I do recollect my days when I was with you on the beach Holding around your shoulder with my hand while your head rest on my shoulder and sharing our love Gentle kisses on our lips brings passion of desires Our footprints leave a mark as we walk closer to each other A cool breeze touches us to get more close to each other The romantic nights hugs us to make sweet love in deep and to fall into each other arms eternally A special place in my heart always kept for you and it engraved in the deepest part of my soul My thoughts on you is never ending dreams now and want it in reality when you get back to me. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 5/1/2016 2:00:00 AM
A lovely vision you have painted with your romantic words Ravi. # 7 ; )
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/4/2016 2:13:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 4/29/2016 4:17:00 PM
Ravi, this is such a tender, loving, and romantic piece! You just know how to express these sentiments in such a captivating way! Beautifully done, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 5/4/2016 2:13:00 AM
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Date: 4/29/2016 12:05:00 AM
Hi Ravi, Ahhhhhh! I just love this and I love light poetry, as I was reading I had images in my mind of a couple strolling along the ocean front, in fact I might grab Peter and take him down to the beach and stroll the golden sands with him LoL. It sounds Oh! so romantic, great write, take care........Vera
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/4/2016 2:14:00 AM
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Date: 4/28/2016 10:12:00 PM
Beautiful write Ravi...Well written...A7
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Date: 5/4/2016 2:14:00 AM
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Date: 4/28/2016 8:48:00 PM
Very romantic, Ravi. Love it when our thoughts for someone are as never ending dreams!!
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Date: 5/4/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend Andrea. Appreciated.
Date: 4/28/2016 7:10:00 PM
So lovely and romantic, Ravi. I enjoyed reading your words of longing and love that you have for that special someone in your life. 7, Sandra
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/4/2016 2:15:00 AM
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Date: 4/28/2016 3:23:00 PM
Very romantic work..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/4/2016 2:15:00 AM
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Date: 4/28/2016 2:29:00 PM
Your romantic poems are always a pleasure to read, Ravi; when two hearts are separated by distance, the feelings become more intense. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/4/2016 2:15:00 AM
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Date: 4/28/2016 1:49:00 PM
A tenderly romantic poem with beautiful imageries dear, Ravi!
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Date: 5/4/2016 2:15:00 AM
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Date: 4/28/2016 10:15:00 AM
- A wonderful and touching love poems Ravi - Always enjoy your writing - hugs // Sun :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/4/2016 2:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated. Love, hugs and kissesxxxx
Date: 4/28/2016 8:48:00 AM
Memories of the one we love can bring us happiness and pain. I hope one of you spans the ocean, Ravi.
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Date: 5/4/2016 2:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.