Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

My Thoughts On You

My thoughts on you.........

When I walk alone on the beach
while the sun set across the ocean
my desires for your love brings me lots of pleasure
and leave with a great thoughts on you
My inner heart mounts with your warmth thoughts
and tides with our emotions flow even we are apart
I do recollect my days when I was with you on the beach
Holding around your shoulder with my hand while your
head rest on my shoulder and sharing our love 
Gentle kisses on our lips brings passion of desires
Our footprints leave a mark as we walk closer to each other
A cool breeze touches us to get more close to each other
The romantic nights hugs us to make sweet love in deep
and to fall into each other arms eternally
A special place in my heart always kept for you
and it engraved in the deepest part of my soul 
My thoughts on you is never ending dreams now
and want it in reality when you get back to me.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam

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Connie Marcum Wong May 1, 2016 at 2:00 AM A lovely vision you have painted with your romantic words Ravi. # 7 ; ) Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:13 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.

Pandita Sietesantos April 29, 2016 at 4:17 PM Ravi, this is such a tender, loving, and romantic piece! You just know how to express these sentiments in such a captivating way! Beautifully done, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:13 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.

Vera Duggan April 29, 2016 at 12:05 AM Hi Ravi, Ahhhhhh! I just love this and I love light poetry, as I was reading I had images in my mind of a couple strolling along the ocean front, in fact I might grab Peter and take him down to the beach and stroll the golden sands with him LoL. It sounds Oh! so romantic, great write, take care........Vera Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:14 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.

Joseph May April 28, 2016 at 10:12 PM Beautiful write Ravi...Well written...A7 Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:14 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2016 at 8:48 PM Very romantic, Ravi. Love it when our thoughts for someone are as never ending dreams!! Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:14 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend Andrea. Appreciated.

Sandra Haight April 28, 2016 at 7:10 PM So lovely and romantic, Ravi. I enjoyed reading your words of longing and love that you have for that special someone in your life. 7, Sandra Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:15 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.

Sara Kendrick April 28, 2016 at 3:23 PM Very romantic work..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:15 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.

Paul Callus April 28, 2016 at 2:29 PM Your romantic poems are always a pleasure to read, Ravi; when two hearts are separated by distance, the feelings become more intense. ~ Regards // paul Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:15 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 28, 2016 at 1:49 PM A tenderly romantic poem with beautiful imageries dear, Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:15 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2016 at 10:15 AM - A wonderful and touching love poems Ravi - Always enjoy your writing - hugs // Sun :) Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:16 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated. Love, hugs and kissesxxxx

Lin Lane April 28, 2016 at 8:48 AM Memories of the one we love can bring us happiness and pain. I hope one of you spans the ocean, Ravi. Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2016 at 2:16 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Appreciated.