My Thoughts

My thoughts are often filled with longing
Yearning for a love to call my own

Thinking of strong arms to hold me;
Hands so loving they touch my very soul.
Overjoyed by his attentions I turn to face my love.
Unabashedly, I give myself to his lips
Grasping his very essence towards me,
Hungry and demanding; we become one.
To him I am his dream, the one he has long
Searched for; meant to be his love forevermore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:35 AM
Nice romantic expressions, Carmen, congrats on the win
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 7:20 PM
this is lovely Carmen. Congratulations on win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Your great thoughts have brought you a win!! Big congrats to you, Carmen.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Wonderful Acrostic Carmen. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 11:00 AM
very romantic acrostic many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:25 PM
very romantic. It must be for the contest!!
Sietesantos Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 11:36 PM
We all long for true love and this piece reflects that in an excellent way! Bravo! Pandita
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