My Ten Deminsions

In my bed under the sheet
In my home on Roosevelt street
In a city they call Mesa
In the lower part of Arizona
In a state in the U.S.A
On a planet called Earth they say
In a solar system third from the sun
In the Milkyway where life was hung
In a universe where all is included
In the mind of God, begun and concluded
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Stark Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 11:34 PM
You forgot to name Andromeda
Situation Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Is Andramada the name of our .... I should mintion the Milkyway
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:42 AM
You have the x-factor in this one with it uplifting spiritual quality. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Anaya Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:48 PM
You brought it, back to the very beginning of man. Clever, T.S. I went to Mesa community college for a minute. I graduated from AIBT (Arizona Institute of Business Technology) if it even exists anymore. Tuscon rocked concerts.
Situation Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:47 PM
Living in Mesa glad to hear from you.
Hind Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:43 PM
This was really interesting. I liked the conclusion!
Brotherton Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 6:47 PM
When I was back in the sixties and seventies, I would call this one 'trippy man.' But in this dimension, I'll just call it fantastic. Love it.
Situation Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:30 AM
something we all know but never add up.
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:20 AM
very very cool!!
Baker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 10:14 AM
I like it TS. Especially the last line. Write On, my friend! Bill
Situation Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:30 AM
He knows everything.
Bell Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 9:37 AM
The only thing god got wrong was, letting man loose on it. Mind you, we might not be here much longer.
Situation Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:29 AM
This Trump thing got me thinking any moment now.
Ray Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 7:17 AM
know Mesa very well, born there in Phoenix, i live on Roosevelt in Oregon... the last line says it all...loved it
Situation Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:31 AM
In the south we call you "Home boy".
Downing  Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 8:06 PM
Well, it’s awesome! :)
Rolland Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 3:52 PM
enjoyed you poem, are we at the right place on earth ? yann
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