My Tears You Are Going To Spill

I feel the sting of it
Much like a whip crack slap
of a flag in the wind
Your voice raised in anger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Keys Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 1:10 PM
oooh - very sharp, still stinging. i will have to remember never to raise my voice - to anyone. thank you, chuck
Gorelick Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Ouch...you made me feel it. Good one. BG
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 6:44 PM
Nice images to show voice in anger
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