Constance La France Poet Grook

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Written, August 04, 2024
Copyright Protected,  ID 04-1663-369-08
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Example for my Grook Contest.

 

my tears fall

a word thrown_
an action meant to hurt this soul
a mean-spirited person smiles with wickedness
my tears fall ...
and my broken soul swirls with heartache and pain
in disbelief I want to run-away and hide
NO !!!
I will stand tall and strong
and face this evil demon face-to-face
and will just be "beautiful me" inside and out

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Eve Roper August 10, 2024 at 9:18 PM Powerful and meaningful, enjoyed reading. Constance La France August 12, 2024 at 1:26 PM Eve, thank you so much for the nice comment, appreciate, Constance

Valsa George August 9, 2024 at 7:45 PM When we ignore the ones who hurt us without any reaction or being totally passive, they get the best treatment. We cannot make everyone say good things or kind words about us. Amid all accusations, standing tall and strong is the best way. Enjoyed your cute little poem. Constance La France August 12, 2024 at 1:27 PM Valsa, your words are truth, thank you, I always try to stand tall and strong, Constance

Crystol Woods August 7, 2024 at 9:51 PM We only hope and pray this never happens to our children. Nothing hurts us more than our childrens pain. You've captured the inner struggle brilliantly! Good for you! Nvrr let em get u down! Xo Constance La France August 9, 2024 at 3:14 PM Crystol, I hate to see children bullied, it breaks my heart because I know how that feels. Thank you for the compliment, and comment, Constance

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2024 at 9:30 AM I've not heard of this form either. Well, I heard of it but not sure I ever wrote it. Thanks for the lovely example, Constance. Constance La France August 7, 2024 at 2:57 PM Andrea, you will do well, just follow my example and the contest instructions, thanks for the compliment, Constance

Ink Empress August 4, 2024 at 8:32 AM Oh this is a form iv never heard of or tried. Intrigued to learn. And i love what youv expressed here. Yes sometimes they deserve nothing but that. “ I will stand tall and strong and face this evil demon face-to-face and will just be "beautiful me" inside and out“ as they dont deserve our energy. Pleasure reading this Constance La France August 6, 2024 at 4:06 PM Ink, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, Constance