my tears fall

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Written, August 04, 2024
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1663-369-08
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

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Example for my Grook Contest.

a word thrown_ an action meant to hurt this soul a mean-spirited person smiles with wickedness my tears fall ... and my broken soul swirls with heartache and pain in disbelief I want to run-away and hide NO !!! I will stand tall and strong and face this evil demon face-to-face and will just be "beautiful me" inside and out

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2024 9:18:00 PM

Powerful and meaningful, enjoyed reading.

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2024 1:26:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for the nice comment, appreciate, Constance

Valsa George

Date: 8/9/2024 7:45:00 PM

When we ignore the ones who hurt us without any reaction or being totally passive, they get the best treatment. We cannot make everyone say good things or kind words about us. Amid all accusations, standing tall and strong is the best way. Enjoyed your cute little poem.

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2024 1:27:00 PM

Valsa, your words are truth, thank you, I always try to stand tall and strong, Constance

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/7/2024 9:51:00 PM

We only hope and pray this never happens to our children. Nothing hurts us more than our childrens pain. You've captured the inner struggle brilliantly! Good for you! Nvrr let em get u down! Xo

Constance La France
Date: 8/9/2024 3:14:00 PM

Crystol, I hate to see children bullied, it breaks my heart because I know how that feels. Thank you for the compliment, and comment, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2024 9:30:00 AM

I've not heard of this form either. Well, I heard of it but not sure I ever wrote it. Thanks for the lovely example, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2024 2:57:00 PM

Andrea, you will do well, just follow my example and the contest instructions, thanks for the compliment, Constance

Ink Empress

Date: 8/4/2024 8:32:00 AM

Oh this is a form iv never heard of or tried. Intrigued to learn. And i love what youv expressed here. Yes sometimes they deserve nothing but that. “ I will stand tall and strong and face this evil demon face-to-face and will just be "beautiful me" inside and out“ as they dont deserve our energy. Pleasure reading this

Constance La France
Date: 8/6/2024 4:06:00 PM

Ink, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, Constance