Zyrool Gifford | + Follow Poet |
Free verse | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

My take on Love

Love is like a gentle whisper
That lingers on the edge of a
cool breeze,
Unexpectedly, it touches you
And slowly caresses its way
Through to the depths of your 
heart with ease,
Then boldly slips right into your 
soul, taking a firm hold.


By Zyrool

Copyright © Zyrool Gifford | Year Posted 2025

Please Login to post a comment

Deb M Date: 7/5/2025 7:31:00 AM Your take on love Zyrool is simply beautiful my friend! Excellent poem... Debx Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 5/28/2025 6:35:00 PM Beautiful ending- :) Login to Reply Zyrool Gifford Date: 5/30/2025 9:14:00 AM Thank you so much, Paige. Stay Blessed.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/22/2025 2:09:00 AM To read poems of others is difficult at times, but I lose heart when poets do no respond. See Tommy's blog. Login to Reply Zyrool Gifford Date: 5/22/2025 2:22:00 AM Hello Victor, thanks for dropping by. I am a bit confused to your comment though. Wishing you a wonderful day my poet friend.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/21/2025 9:00:00 AM For sure…you have a brush with love, but true love has soul-impact! Login to Reply Zyrool Gifford Date: 5/21/2025 9:15:00 AM Thank you for dropping by, Sue. You’re so right. Sending Blessings your way, my poet friend.

Ink Empress Date: 5/21/2025 6:51:00 AM How beautiful and evocative is your poetic depiction of love poetic soul! So well written and flows just seamlessly! Absolutely loved reading this heartfelt poem especially the line "That lingers on the edge of a cool breeze," that is such a beautiful line! So creative! Love is a beautiful emotion shared between two hearts. Sending you light always! Login to Reply Zyrool Gifford Date: 5/21/2025 9:16:00 AM Thank you for your beautiful words, Ink. They always lift my spirits up. Sending Blessings your way my friend.

Valsa George Date: 5/20/2025 10:18:00 PM Love finds its way to our heart even without our knowledge. Only when it has its firm grip that we come to know of it. Beautiful poem, Zyrool. Login to Reply Zyrool Gifford Date: 5/21/2025 9:19:00 AM Thank you for the visit and your support, Valsa. Means a lot. Stay Blessed my friend.

Anne Winter Date: 5/20/2025 7:33:00 PM Dear Zyrool, beautifully written! Your poem is absolutely gorgeous! Love it! It's beautifully deep and romantic. Best, Anne Login to Reply Zyrool Gifford Date: 5/21/2025 9:20:00 AM Hello Anne, thank you so much for your beautiful words, greatly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful day.

Karen Jones Date: 5/19/2025 5:32:00 AM Nicely said! Very romantic! Login to Reply Zyrool Gifford Date: 5/19/2025 8:07:00 AM Hello Karen, thank you so much for the read and your kind words. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead my friend.