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My take on Love

Love is like a gentle whisper
That lingers on the edge of a
cool breeze,
Unexpectedly, it touches you
And slowly caresses its way
Through to the depths of your 
heart with ease,
Then boldly slips right into your 
soul, taking a firm hold.


By Zyrool

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Deb M

July 5, 2025 at 7:31 AM

Your take on love Zyrool is simply beautiful my friend! Excellent poem... Debx

Zyrool Gifford

October 20, 2025 at 8:39 AM

Hello Deb, sorry my thank you is late, an oversight, my friend. Your words means a lot to me. Wishing you a beautiful new week ahead.

Paige Hind

May 28, 2025 at 6:35 PM

Beautiful ending- :)

Zyrool Gifford

May 30, 2025 at 9:14 AM

Thank you so much, Paige. Stay Blessed.

Victor Buhagiar

May 22, 2025 at 2:09 AM

To read poems of others is difficult at times, but I lose heart when poets do no respond. See Tommy's blog.

Zyrool Gifford

May 22, 2025 at 2:22 AM

Hello Victor, thanks for dropping by. I am a bit confused to your comment though. Wishing you a wonderful day my poet friend.

Kim Rodrigues

May 21, 2025 at 9:00 AM

For sure…you have a brush with love, but true love has soul-impact!

Zyrool Gifford

May 21, 2025 at 9:15 AM

Thank you for dropping by, Sue. You’re so right. Sending Blessings your way, my poet friend.

Ink Empress

May 21, 2025 at 6:51 AM

How beautiful and evocative is your poetic depiction of love poetic soul! So well written and flows just seamlessly! Absolutely loved reading this heartfelt poem especially the line "That lingers on the edge of a cool breeze," that is such a beautiful line! So creative! Love is a beautiful emotion shared between two hearts. Sending you light always!

Zyrool Gifford

May 21, 2025 at 9:16 AM

Thank you for your beautiful words, Ink. They always lift my spirits up. Sending Blessings your way my friend.