My Sweet Love - Triplets

You take my breath completely away You mean the world to me, my love and Only I have to gaze softly into your eyes I rememb'r all the smiles upon your face And when I'm sad I replay them in my mind My heart savorin' every time I can't replace Sometimes it seems I'm living just a dream From which I don't want ever to wake up from And when you're far 'way I just want to scream 'Cause life without you can never be the same Love runs wild thru my veins like a roarin' fire And my skin burns recurring just your name. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2008 October,19,2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/21/2014 9:14:00 AM

really most interesting beautifully crafted piece dorian very beautifully penned

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/23/2015 12:06:00 AM

Thank you so kindly, Liam,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! ;)Love n' hugs! xoxox D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/20/2014 7:56:00 PM

Quite Beautiful "D"!!! By the way, I saw Brenda's note below and your response. I've written a lot of "Tercet" poems (a verse unit of three lines), and a "Triplet" or "Triad" is just another synonym for "Tercet." (Although Triplet/Triad is becoming more antiquated as words for this stanza sequence.) My recent poem of last week, "A World on Fire," was in a Tercet poetic format, but it was "unrhymed." Regardless, of these details, your work here is most excellent. Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/23/2015 12:07:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Gary,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D " "

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/20/2014 6:35:00 PM

Very beautiful poem Dorian, I just don't get what Triplets mean here? Sorry sweetie. Help

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2014 7:42:00 PM

I am more than glad to had helped you Brenda. Sorry about the confusion, a triplet form, can be from one to as many rhymed three line verses or stanzas, and also the lines can be done as: aaa, bbb etc...in monorhyme or the way I did mine in this poem. I have done triplets in many ways and even counted syllables in some of my triplets poems. Hope this information helps you more...about this form. I have seen some poets even do the triples free verse, but personally I like my triplets always rhyming. :) Hugs!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/20/2014 7:22:00 PM

Ok thanks for the help Dorian. I did look to see if there was just three stanzas but there were more so I was confused. Now everything is clear and I am happy to learn something new.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2014 6:50:00 PM

This is a form and it means you do as many stanzas you want of 3 lines each, and they're rhymed as...abc, def, ghi, and so on...just like I did mine, no syllable count or meter is required as a rule but syllable count can be done, this is up to the poet, Brenda. Hope this helps. Thank you my dear friend for stopping by and all. Glad you liked this one :) Take care! Love. xxx D.