My Sweet Kitty

My sweet kitty 
Sits on my lap when I'm writing.
My sweet kitty
And I reside in the city.
He hates the gunfire and fighting,
I fondly pet him, delighting
My sweet kitty.




A Rondelet for Dr. Mehta's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 1, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Very cute poem here Joyce...Congratulations on your win.
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
B Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 1:12 AM
A beautiful reminder of how pets can be such good company, congratulations Joyce.
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Joyce, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
Villanueva Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 6:36 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the placement~~~deserve it~~~*-*junjun
Devonshire Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Your "sweet kitty" has found the perfect refuge in a harsh world, Joyce. Beautiful Rondelet. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:15 PM
such a cutie Joyce ..congrats on a wonderful win with this delightful poetry luv..
Horne Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Beautiful write, Joyce. Many congrats : )
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 3:58 PM
I remember this one and congrats, Joyce. a well deserved win. The title reminds me of the game "sweet kitty" do you know that game? hmm on second thought, it's called Poor kitty I think!!
Ramsdale Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:32 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:12 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 11:07 AM
ahhh, of course this one has to appeal to me more than most becuase it's about a sweet kitty!
Ball Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:47 PM
There is something very terapeutic about just sitting quietly and showing affection to another living being. I lve my pets so much. They give me their all and all they aask in return is to be loved and cared for. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Mehta Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Thank you so much for taking trouble to rewrite it, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 12:10 PM
oh so sweet tribute to kitty Joyce.. u did wonderful with the new form challenge presented .. good luck my friend..luv..
Mehta Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 11:44 AM
Soup Mail!!!!!
Roberts Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:29 AM
adorable, best of luck in the contest Joyce
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