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My Sweet All Sour

" I am sorry!" as I told you before.
You keep saying that I must do more.
Should I break down and cry?
Should I curl up and die?
Either way- you still walk out the door.

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Andrea Dietrich

March 1, 2011 at 11:11 PM

Hey, this is pretty good, Gerard,how did I ever miss it before?

Trudy Diane Rider

February 4, 2011 at 10:42 AM

Wonderfully done!

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2011 at 3:35 PM

Between a rock and a hard place..Sometimes it is not easy to know what the other expects..Glad that I chose this one to read for puts new light on some situations..Your presence at my work give me chuckly kind of feeling..Me doing the Marshall Arts kind of dance not exactly..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 28, 2010 at 6:06 PM

Perfection ....Gerard.. good luck in the contest... short but sweet my friend...and reads just like a first place winner... simple yet direct... and to the point luv...