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My Surreal World - Inspired By Constance La France

I live in the surreal and I like how it feels, I am much more the hero in there; When reality strikes it fills me with fright and nobody about me cares. In my own head, in that world instead, I am confident and handsome and bright; And in my fantasy mind, the struggles I find always seem to turn out just right. But to survive and stay alive I must visit where other people live; Where I am awful plain and feel the pain of lacking the best God has to give. When in that world I roam I am always alone and haven’t any friends; In the world I prefer I am popular and my magnanimity never ends. I am loved by all and have a ball; there are adventures every day; Being too shy and a clumsy guy never seem to get in my way. Real world folks think I’m a joke because I am always staring off into space; They just aren’t aware and what do I care, when I’m in my special place. Don’t feel bad for I am not sad that in your world I don’t fit in; To tell the truth you are a bit uncouth in my surreal fantasy land; But don’t despair for I wouldn’t dare be rude and mean in the surreal; In my mind we are always kind because I know how you would feel. NOTE: This poem was inspired by a response I received from Constance La France to a post I posted on one of her blogs where she said, “I have one foot in reality and one foot in surreal.. and I like it there” – This gave birth to the line, “I live in the surreal and I like how it feels” – the rest of the poem grew from those roots.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/5/2011 1:13:00 PM
Constance is truly an inspiration to this site and to me personally also Joe.. a wonderful write from her one line ..would have been a wonderful entry for Drake's I roam....contest which has closed ..but a superb piece indeed my friend.. kudos to Constance and U both...luv..
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Date: 5/5/2011 5:52:00 AM
What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning Joe. You were inspired by one of the best ever Joe. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 8:50:00 PM
Way to be inspired, Joe. A very cool poem came from it!
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:38:00 PM
Joe, I am happy I inspired you with that line, and I think your poem is wonderful, and I know it is so true of many of us poets, how can we turn off the poet, impossible, I create when the moment comes, I fall into it, I let it take me down the path to the end~~
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