My Sundress Memories

My sundress hangs there limply,
needing me to fill it out.
The rains have been relentless
putting all sunshine to rout.
The ides of March have come and gone
without a sign of spring.
My raincoat and umbrella are
each such a ragged thing.
It’s now Easter vacation and
I’m yearning for some fun.
Today the rains have halted
and we have a bit of sun.
Excitedly I pull my sundress out
and down over my head. 
“You must be careful you don’t burn,
is all my mom has said.
The other kids have come for me.
We head out for the day.
After downing the car's soft roof
we’re on our merry way.
Adventuring on the seaside,
water is too cold to swim.
The sandy beach is warming and
we are all young and trim.
In my canary yellow sundress,
I’m feeling very pretty.
To cover with unneeded wrap
would truly be a pity.
We romp and play like small children,
the whole of the spring day.
When evening breezes cool the air
we can no longer stay.
When Mother meets me at the door,
look on her face is stern.
“Why is it you won’t listen?
I told you, you would burn.”
My face and shoulders, arms and legs
are just as red as fire.
I meekly bare my shoulders
for the lotions they require.
I hope I’ve learned my lesson
as the pain is quite severe,
but my sundress will be calling 
on first spring day, come next year.

By: Joyce Johnson
For Constance LaFrance's contest "The Sundress"  Won 4th place



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/9/2011 5:55:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Joyce in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:50:00 PM
Hey Girl...Love your sundress poetry...I remember when I wore sundresses...but you give me 500 characters here to comment so I'll just say...Tents are nice too!
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest, Joyce! Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:20:00 AM
You know I love your poem, so just let me add my congratulations for your win in the contest, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 7:25:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win.Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:52:00 AM
Quite an amusing read, hopefully the sunblock was remembered thereafter. Congratulations! Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:35:00 PM
special congrats for the great winning slot in the contest, joyce.. :) huggs
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:51:00 PM
Such a heart touching write joyce. Big Congratulations.
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:15:00 PM
I think it was well worth it, having that super fun day in that canary sundress :) youchy youchy though, don't forget the sunblock next time ;) Congratulations on your win, Joyce :) enjoyed this one :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:10:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:48:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your spectacular win in the sundress contest with this awesome entry my friend.. honored to share the winners list with u luv.. enjoy...
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:08:00 PM
Wonderful job Joyce, congratulations on your fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/3/2011 4:13:00 PM
Such a cute poem, Joyce....we should have listened more to what our mother's had to say!! They were always right!! :)
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:08:00 AM
Great fun - many congrats : ) Jack
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Date: 3/24/2011 9:46:00 AM
such a lovely romp though childhood! Light & Love
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:53:00 PM
very creative. you capitivated me. john
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Date: 3/23/2011 5:50:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry this morning Joyce. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 2:36:00 PM
Joyce a lovely story of your yellow sundress my friend.. from a child's perspective so sweet and innocent luv.. I also remember those sunburn days and the lotion too.. Mom was very angry that I did not cover up but the sundress was way too pretty ..good luck in the contest with this elegant write...
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Date: 3/22/2011 1:17:00 PM
You brought back some great memories of those slim, trim days when as young girls we just loved those sundresses. Hope I can slim down for summer to enjoy wearing one again. This is a wonderful poem for Constance's contest, Joyce. I better start writing mine before it fills up! Constance's photos/pictures are so inspiring and the entries are pouring in. Wishing you success with this delightful poem. Love, carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:12:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Joyce, with this sweet poem~~
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:10:00 AM
Enjoyed this Joyce, so annoying when mothers now best!! Best wishes in the contest Em :)
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