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My Stardust At Midnight

She was my angel, my stardust at midnight, My guardian spirit soothing heaven with grace- for the moon gazes upon her glorious sight, as the mosaic azure clouds encompass and embrace. My heart stopped beating the day she died, my soul, like a maze, lost in the universe- her garden of lilies just laid there and cried, as I gather my emotions and write a verse. No other woman could love me like her, no other soul-shining wonder could fulfill- and since her death my eyesight a blur, as the blood through my veins stand still. Forgiveness with atonement seems so far, yet her beauty so intense, I shall forgive- for it was only her pain that left a crimson scar, and I am finding it hard to let go and live. In the dead of the night I shall recall her voice, in the light of day, I shall remember her smile- deep down I feel she always had a choice, but leaving with sorrow... -was just her style. Chimera World February 5, 2017

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Date: 2/20/2017 8:05:00 AM
Beautifully written piece Laura.
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Date: 2/19/2017 10:54:00 AM
Gorgeous poem, Laura... I loved it deeply <3 a well deserved win :)
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:50:00 AM
amazing as usual!
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Date: 2/17/2017 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest. The pain of the loss of a dear one in a tragic manner, never subsides.
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Date: 2/17/2017 5:39:00 PM
Beautiful, luloo - congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:04:00 PM
Loved the pace of this piece LuLoo, congratulations...
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:01:00 PM
This is beautiful Laura and very well written. Congratulations on your high placement.
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