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Inspired by the Psalms 34:1-4:

I will bless the LORD at all times; His praise shall continually be in my mouth. My soul will make its boast in the LORD; The humble will hear it and rejoice. O magnify the LORD with me, And let us exalt His name together.I sought the LORD, and He answered me, And delivered me from all my fears....
MY SPIRIT SINGS Almond eyes speak: "Take me home please-- bonnie green fields where I may wander, chasing butterflies and darting dragonflies dearly gazing to blue and orange streak skies. Everyday, I will find some daffodils fixing and tucking one to my ear, grin painted on my face as I look hungrily to praise and thank you, God! Interred two years ago by mistake, justice and joy, I yearn to feel, kneeling everyday, praying unto God: "Listen to me O tender God and don't leave" Merciful Father heard, He blessed me saying: "Now Son, be fruitful and multiply", I amble-- obedient me to sunny walks down winding roads, persistent to bear the given loads, quicker to maneuver from danger's path, reflexive instincts working double time! Seeking God's wisdom to always guide me, taking time to read the Bible everyday, understanding: "Man shall not live on bread alone... Vexed and pressed by a truckload of trials but whom shall I fear when God is my light and salvation. Xenacious I, excited, wanting to do it in an instant! Yes Lord! Yes Lord! Yes! Yes, Lord, Amen. Zealous is my heart and spirit as I sing! _______________________________________________________ ***xenacious means filled with yearning for change.. Abecedarian - Poetry Contest Sponsor Shadow Hamilton ~~8th place~~ 10:49 pm, July 06, 2015

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Date: 7/31/2015 10:25:00 AM
that was amazing....I once wrote a poem like that for another poetry site, but the people there were too snobby....lol....but I enjoyed this poetic journey you packed with so much wisdom....great write....& 8th place is perfect with me....;)
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:47:00 AM
Weeeeee.. thanks much Eric.. =')! I am enjoring also the poetic journey hence Im still here.. =")!
Date: 7/30/2015 11:00:00 PM
Deep respect for a winning write utilizing this difficult form (for me anyways). I really enjoyed reading your work, Olive!
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Dave, well I enjoyed reading yours too..=') its always a good way for me to learn more new words and more the challenge is there.. :D!
Date: 7/24/2015 3:45:00 PM
Olive, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:42:00 AM
thank you so much Skat... =')!
Date: 7/24/2015 11:53:00 AM
Oh, I love this, Olive! What a wonderful prayer to our Lord! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:41:00 AM
thank you so much LAura.. to Him all the glory, honore, praise and gratitude.. :)!
Date: 7/24/2015 5:34:00 AM
good poem with clever use of hard words Olive congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:01:00 AM
hugs back Shadow.. I thank you for placing me.. :D!
Date: 7/24/2015 12:25:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Olive!
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:00:00 AM
thank you so much Dr. Upma.. :D!
Date: 7/23/2015 5:54:00 PM
This ABC poem is awesome !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:58:00 AM
thank you so much Sara,. :)!
Date: 7/23/2015 5:38:00 PM
Your spirit and faith shine out Olive many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 11:32:00 PM
Thanks much Jan.. :D! hugs!!!
Date: 7/8/2015 11:34:00 AM
Olive-Eloisa!! This is a most positive and wonderful write. The "abecedarian" format worked very well with this particular write. A "7" + FAV!! Could you tell me please, where did you find the word "xenacious" at?? It sounds like a quite rare word. Being a linguist who is adept in several languages, I have a rather large vocabulary of words, but I've not yet run into this word. I have a number of linguistic rare word book, but I can't find this word. (I'm just interested!) Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 7/10/2015 3:28:00 PM
I think what you're doing Olive is truly grand and wonderful. Keep doing all the great stuff you're doing with your poetry. I enjoy your writes very much!! Have a great weekend Amiga!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/9/2015 12:38:00 AM
Most of the words I use in my poems, I try to make it rare and different as possible... Some said sometimes it's even weird but I chose one to take the characteristic of the word-- its picture.. =")!
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Date: 7/9/2015 12:27:00 AM
Gary!=") thank you so much for such positive comment. =") I got it from the internet Gary... =")I just type words beginning in x in google then there.. I read and read an chose what is appropriate to my theme.. =") I know you do unlike me.. !! some of the words am using in my poems are new to me. HEnce, am trying to use them time to time for i to own them in my mind! Cheers too!~Olive ELoisa
Date: 7/8/2015 8:08:00 AM
Outstanding Olive, You are a poet indeed, touched by The Lord. Hang in there you are on the right path.
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Date: 7/9/2015 12:22:00 AM
Im hanging Milton and will never let go! =") thank you!~Olive ELoisa
Date: 7/7/2015 3:50:00 PM
Olive, you are at your best writing like this. A SEVEN
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Date: 7/8/2015 2:45:00 PM
Andie thank you so muvh.. =')
Date: 7/7/2015 12:15:00 PM
The words are descriptive and float onto the page with a steady hand and a brilliant wit that captures the reader's imagination and attention from the beginning and delivers to the end. Emile.
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Date: 7/8/2015 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Emile.. =")! Your are so kind!! He made me alive so its my prime want to share how He made me like how I am now. =")
Date: 7/6/2015 9:09:00 PM
Wonderful!! you have an amazing and beautiful strong pen
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Date: 7/8/2015 8:58:00 AM
Cassie thank you so much!! you have too..=")
Date: 7/6/2015 8:00:00 PM
Go Olive go! Light & Love
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Date: 7/8/2015 8:58:00 AM
WEEEEEEEEEEEEE thnak you Debbie.=")~
Date: 7/6/2015 3:41:00 PM
An alphabet of love to our God written with such love and beauty; a wonderful read. Edward
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward so pleasee that it camr oug like this.. =")
Date: 7/6/2015 1:57:00 PM
- A truly beautiful pearl, dear Olive (7) - I enjoy reading this - good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/7/2015 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise.. =') As much as you enjoyed reading this I am so happy writing this one.. the results pleased me.. =')!
Date: 7/6/2015 1:41:00 PM
This one is a winner. What a great Poem.
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Date: 7/7/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Ken.. All for God's glory
Date: 7/6/2015 1:29:00 PM
Simply wonderful Olive, it gets better when one reads it again and again. Top marks as always little one~hugs//James :) :)
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Date: 7/7/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much huge one..I always appreciate your commentsm. Tight hugs!~Olive Eloisa
Date: 7/6/2015 12:34:00 PM
What a magnificent praise to our Lord that radiates throughout your lovely poem, Olive! I hope you place very high in this contest, and what a delight it was to read! a 7 :)
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thanks much.. =') if I win it will be for God's glory not me.. =")
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/7/2015 7:51:00 AM
Laura when I made this poem what I had in mind is about nature but suddenly it came to me why not I made it a Spiritual write and so it came like this and am glad it did turn out like this
Date: 7/6/2015 12:19:00 PM
Olive, you have penned a real beauty for the contest, a winner for sure, a dazzling 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, I love you . . .
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Date: 7/7/2015 6:42:00 AM
Broken Wings, I thank you for stopping by and reading my poem even leaving a comment.. !This is one of the poems I wrote in a short period of time...