My Spaghetti Mind

As I smell the spaghetti sauce
and turn the heat up a little higher,
my spaghetti mind is quite
confused quite like a quagmire,
with the spaghetti nerves
all in a jumbled mess and
criss-crossing one another,
my thoughts are all a traffic
jam instead of a smooth pattern,
I'm having one of those days
with lots of issues which are quite frustrating,
I guess you could say my spaghetti mind
is disorientated and quite discombobulated!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:41 PM
This poem tasted delicious, Cheryl. A very entertaining read. Ty for sharing it. The last two verses are priceless. "I guess you could say my spaghetti mind is disoriented and quite discombobulated!" That was a beautiful ending to such a delightful treat. Will read more for sure. Love your work so far. Only love and joy to you and yours.
Hoffman Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Thanks so much Freddie, you are too kind! Love to you & yours too!:)
DiMino Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 11:17 AM
The cheese will make it all right! Love your little quagmire. Great writing.
Hoffman Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Thanks for the visit and kind comment Joe!:)
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