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My Soul Belongs To You

I feel your spirit in the trees
        As your blessed birds
Surround me with their song.
        That first warm sip 
Of morning tea,
        My closed eyes,
deep long breaths
        As I meditate and
I sense your divineness in me.

I feel your breath upon my cheek
        In a caressing breeze
That wanders by,
        That faintest floral scent
That lingers in the air
        Lets me know 
You are everywhere.

I feel one with the rising sun
        As twilight skies 
Gently morph from lavender to blue,
        And your fingers of light behind
Silver clouds subtlety filters through.
        I am thrilled to spend 
Another glorious day with you.

rev. June 11, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Crenshaw Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 9:43 PM
Inspiring. I like. :-)
Guzzi Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 8:27 PM
So glad to have read your verse this evening keep up the good work! Light & Love
Kapoor Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 7:29 AM
A beauty blended with the touch of refreshing scenes of Nature. In your Poem one feel the gush of wind and the twilight beams touching the cheeks to feel us with the delight of His splendors. Great write dear friend. You have created an alluring picture Connie. The Poem deserves 10 out of 7. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Sirak Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Lovely and inspirational. A great read for a Sunday morning.
Neels Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Connie it is amazing how much peace we feel when we are in the presence of the Almighty.. this is a beautiful gem. I enjoyed it this afternoon. Hope your day will be blessed :)
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 3:08 PM
Such beautiful, inspirational words, Connie. We need to thank God for each glorious day and breath in the beauty of life and the nature he created for us as a miracle. I enjoyed reading this very much. Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 1:25 PM
beautiful and uplifting... thanks for the wonderful feeling.. LINDA
Anish Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 8:55 AM
I look forward to my morning tea myself! Who is the "you" in this poem? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 12:38 PM
The spirit of the Lord of course. I am most in divine presence in Nature. Cheers, Connie
Falotico Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Beautiful!! So glad I came back today to read you.. xox Michael
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Thank you very much for your visit Michael. Cheers, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So good to know this was brand new one!
Meade Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 9:51 PM
Creation -- from the great to the small -- breaks forth in song, singing high praises that we as part of that creation can listen and participate in the celebration of life! Wonder poem dear friend. 7
Pinet Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 8:54 PM
Your descriptive language and your suburb imagery are second to none. Well done, harmony mixed with tranquillity has been captured by your artistic pen and held motionless on the page.
Onclaud Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 3:24 PM
I must say your work sings with a rhythm that pleases the soul.. very beautiful, connie.. huggs
Yvonne Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 9:09 AM
This is simply stunning as if your hand was guided. This is a very uplifting poem. For me it is a fav, a perfect one to read on a bad day. Lots Of Love, Armand!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 9:08 AM
This refreshes me!
La France Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 6:59 AM
Connie, what a peaceful and flowing poem, I so enjoyed reading it today, just so beautiful, well done and thanks for visiting my poem, in the chilly morn . . .
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 5:15 AM
What an inspired write this is, Connie! I have felt serene moments like these, but the way you describe them is beyond me! I love it, and it goes to my favs! Have a lovely day! // hugs ... paul
Manassian Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Oh Connie...This is so beautiful. Tranquility comes to the heart. What a blessed write, my dear. :) If you can, try to listen to the song You're Everywhere by Heirloom. You'll love it. Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 4:17 AM
I have to wait until I can get on my desk top. Wouldn't come through on my kindle. Thank you very much for your lovely comments Eileen. Hugs, Connie
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Beautiful, soulful and uplifting, Connie! Hugs,Rhonda
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 4:14 AM
Thank you very much Rhonda. I am happy you want to try another Constanza. Hugs, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 8:02 PM
wow, connie is this one brand new. It is just perfect. A fave back at ya!! (and a seven)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Thank you Andrea. Yes, I just wrote it this morning. Thanks so much for the fave. Congrats too on all your recent wins. Hugs, Connie
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:37 PM
He surrounds us in nature...how lovely....hugs Tim
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:21 PM
Darn, I hate when the remarks goes to the next person, which happens sometimes here Tim. Sorry you got Kim's message. I appreciate your lovely comment. Thanks so much! hugs, Connie
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 8:36 PM
Thanks so much Kim for your sweet comments. Love, Connie xx
Merryman Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Beautiful and uplifting! Connie, it was a joy to read this poem! Love, Kim
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Thanks so much Kim for your sweet comments. Love, Connie xx
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