My Soul

asleep before birth gathering dreams from air breathing destiny

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/3/2016 10:28:00 AM

Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/3/2010 3:44:00 PM

Hey James, Thnx for the comment on my piece...means a lot...I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me....later, Jimmy

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/3/2010 1:59:00 PM

hmmmm always! Light & Love Happy Spring!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/2/2010 8:52:00 PM

Wonderful words Jimbo and a deep thought from your soul... to share... agreed... happy Easter celebration to u and yours.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2010 3:15:00 PM

Great write in this short one.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2010 8:48:00 AM

VERY nice, and you are a positive person, as I noticed from your comment to my trickster blog. haha. thanks for responding to it. LUv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/2/2010 4:32:00 AM

Well done James. Thanks for your comment.-Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2010 9:24:00 PM

The eternal nature of the soul -- its past, present and future -- are well-defined in your awesome senryu, Jamesy! Glad to see you getting active with your poetry here again. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2010 8:08:00 PM

very expressive senyru