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My Son's Check-Up

My son went for a checkup, wound up in emerge Docs were alerted, thought he might be on the verge He's only fifty-two Has a stressful job beaucoup Tests proved negative but caution should be urged

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/3/2019 5:19:00 PM

Hello happy jack, some jobs are very stressful for some people. to handle. Have a nice evening my friend.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2019 5:35:00 PM

What's stressful for some isn't for others! He really enjoys what he does! He's VP of a large advertising firm!!! Thanks, Darlene! Love, Happy Jack XOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/3/2019 1:32:00 PM

Maureens right , no job is worth your health, lifestyle change is a must though, next warning might be fatal, god forbid.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2019 1:52:00 PM

Sweet Mo is a sharp cookie!!! Is she listening? Scottie's such a happy-go-lucky guy! Methinks he got the message though!!!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/3/2019 8:49:00 AM

Yikes! No job is worth your health (she says, a worn and wery retired bike messenger) ;), xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2019 9:30:00 AM

One never knows... scary! Here I am, 84 next week and still cookin'! Initial results turn out to be a scare and to lose some weight... he's way overweight!!! A wakeup call! XOX