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My Son Kidnapped

My Son Kidnapped

                       My story is thee only one I needed to write  
                     one year In captivity underground me and my son
                    days passed by we were prevented of food & water
  bombardments outside were heard, suddenly a militia ran towards my son kidnapped him to be killed running after him screaming his name I knelt to pray
         Oh my God without him I will die show him the way to come back
   sleeping on the floor one night I heard him call my name I knew he came       
                     we held each other tight our tears had no end.                                                                        
                                              5/1/13
                                           Therese Bacha

Copyright © Therese Bacha | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/30/2013 10:41:00 PM wow, terry this has such a strong message. I am happy you and your sons got away. How are you doing, dear? I hope to hear from you soon at my email! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/30/2013 11:28:00 PM Love your smile.....yes it was a bad event...i wrote it for the contest.....tell me please what does N/A means when they say yes to my poem ......thanks love Terry xoxo

Don Johnson Date: 1/17/2013 10:39:00 PM ripping of the heart strings, but happiness is great, love triumphs over everything, and i am happy mate..... no books for ole johnson :) Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/18/2013 6:45:00 PM Thank you so so much.....yes it was a happy ending. See u later. Love Terry

Debbie Duncan Date: 1/15/2013 1:14:00 AM Oh , Terry , this brought tears , I posted a picture to another site " humans are capable of of such destruction & and also capable of great kindness" thank you 4 reading my Let me come over" ;} Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/15/2013 6:20:00 AM Yes it was terrible....but God Is Great..... your poems are amazing......i also like the way you write......thank you..Terry

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/14/2013 11:43:00 AM No writing could surpass what you went through for We understand something in the degree of our experience! An awe-provoking story that brings you closer to HIM! A magnificent piece of work! Thank you! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/14/2013 11:47:00 AM Yes it was so sad so sad.....but God is great.....war destroys our soul.....but faith leads us to recovery....Thank you for sharing...xoxo Terry

Curt Mongold Date: 1/13/2013 3:20:00 PM The emotional content in this piece is tremendous. That anyone should have to endure these hardships for someone else's greed is a hideous statement on our general lack of humanity to our fellow human beings. To survive such an event only shows your strength and gives hope and faith to all. Yours truly, Curt Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/13/2013 4:24:00 PM Thank you Curt for your feelings.....it was a hell of a time....suffering for 16 years in a war is not easy....but thank God we now are living in Canada with wonderful people...Terry

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 1/13/2013 9:54:00 AM Wow Terry; That was sad, but I'm glad that you and your son are safe now. Wars are really bad. A lot of inocent people get hurt. Jesus was looking out for you. My respect for you as a writer, as a Lady and as a friend if you accept me. Please check out ( letter To A Friend ). Lucilla Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/13/2013 12:09:00 PM Of course i am grateful to be a friend.....yes we went through hell.but God was with us.......Take see u later....... LoveTerry

Terry O'Leary Date: 1/12/2013 6:25:00 PM War is so horrific... especially for those called 'collateral damage'... that you had to experience such terror is reflected in the strength of your poetry... Terry (wonderful poem) Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/12/2013 7:01:00 PM Thank you.yes it was horrible...i thank God for everyday in our Now....missed your writings....Love Terry

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/12/2013 3:42:00 PM very sad and hope this is not true ,, but that being said this world is troubled and we must stay hopeful and keep that candle lit, enjoyed your write,...~always & forever~PD Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/12/2013 4:40:00 PM Thanks PD...it was true.....3 days they kidnapped him....that was years ago during our war of 16 years in Lebanon...glad to have you have back...Love Terry

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 1/12/2013 1:09:00 PM Sounds like a terrible ordeal Terry, I can't imagine the anguish you felt and hope everything is in order now and your pain healed. Sometimes writing to share gives strenth. Love, Lizzie Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/12/2013 2:28:00 PM Hi Elizabeth, thank you so much for caring....it was terrible....thank God he came back safe.....Love Terry

Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/12/2013 1:33:00 AM it must have been terrible.....well penned here, good luck.take care..... love,Mehnaz Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/12/2013 5:17:00 AM Hello Mehnaz.....yes it was sad.....but God is great.....love Terry

James Fraser Date: 1/11/2013 4:47:00 PM Certainly an emotional time Therese. Thankfully he was returned, and thank you for sharing this private poem. Have a most lovely weekend :) Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/11/2013 4:52:00 PM Thank you James .....Terry

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/11/2013 3:42:00 PM I enjoyed your write this evening thanks for the contest entry BIG hugs [work on the last line okies?] Light & Love Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/11/2013 3:53:00 PM Thank you Debbie......have a nice weekend.....xoxo Love Terry....please write to me what to do for the last line? OK

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2013 3:15:00 PM Woooow it is for true Terry ? - Very well written. - Hope your weekend will be fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 1/11/2013 3:36:00 PM Yes, they took him for 3 days he was 16 years old.....and thank God high authorities brought him back....it was hell......I thank God for His Blessing.....Love Terry