My Son

No longer an orphan, my son, please know That I will comfort your nights when fears call, And teach kindness along the way, although I'd let you brave life's challenge after all… Yet kind we'd be, heart to heart, side by side Playing rough- ball as any boy would do : I’m now your father, your strength and your guide Then hopefully the hero you'll pursue... See, I am told that kids grow up quite fast That one day it will be you in my place-- Forsaken you’re not, I'll do my best to cast A mirror of me which fate can’t erase. Let seasons bring us more joy as we roam In a place where love abides; this is home. Your Best Sonnet 2018 Contest for John Hamilton Written 6/16/2018 Resubmitted 7/05/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 12/13/2018 9:43:00 AM
Nette, my mother was also my father when I grew up, you are an awesome women my friend!
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Date: 7/13/2018 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:01:00 AM
I love how you can change perspectives, this written from a father to son, it is really good. congrats on your win
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Date: 7/8/2018 9:28:00 PM
Your beautifully tender sonnet reached deep within my being and touched my heart in the most uplifting way, Nette. An inspiring write. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/8/2018 8:35:00 PM
Lovely sonnet Nette..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/8/2018 12:34:00 PM
Congrats Nette a very touching sonnet!
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:49:00 AM
So tender! I interpreted it as an adoptive father reassuring his "new" son, but I may have it wrong.
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Date: 6/20/2018 9:03:00 AM
Your brilliant sonnet sings to this old soul my good friend! More proof that you truly are a great poetess!~! A fav... and shining jewel this sonnet is..
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Date: 6/17/2018 11:49:00 AM
A wonderful poem Nette, a poem of loyalty and dedication for someone who lost everything...
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Date: 6/16/2018 9:54:00 PM
Moving poem with a lovely message, nette - good luck for the contest.
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Date: 6/16/2018 8:17:00 PM
A moving write Nette...best wishes
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Date: 6/16/2018 4:42:00 PM
Quite touching and emotive write..excellent poem nette..best for a win.
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Date: 6/16/2018 3:43:00 PM
I love the line,"cast an image of me the years can't erase". I think that would be every father's prayer. Well done, nette and good luck:)
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Date: 6/16/2018 2:39:00 PM
- A deep touching poem, Nette - Best wishes in the contest :) - A Norwegian hugs :)))
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Date: 6/16/2018 2:05:00 PM
This sent a patter in my heart of times remembered. great poem, nette An italian hug
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Date: 6/16/2018 1:45:00 PM
A touching write, nette.
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Date: 6/16/2018 12:17:00 PM
A promise made to those in need of love...good luck...I see you and I went different directions with this...
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