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My Solar Eclipse We only made words but somehow I knew Your magnetic charm would lead me to you I waited until your force drew me in Stirring sensations that were so akin Phenomena as a Solar Eclipse The moon moved between the earth and the sun A sensation of your scent and your lips Slowly but surely the moon drifts away Creating a darkness into the day A brief stint of black then returns the light But I am solar and you are lunar For your moon is dark and my sun is bright But someday anon in Twenty twenty four A nova created then we will score *Dedicated to the Solar Eclipse on August 21, 2017 and a failed romance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/2/2017 10:10:00 AM
Nice work.
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:52:00 AM
a truly beautiful and topical theme Ralph, sorry about the failed romance but the sun still shines with your glorious words (I hope you were wearing your sunglasses!) hugs jan xx
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/26/2017 8:14:00 AM
Hi Jan, thank you. I make it a point to stay away from eclipses since I only have one good eye but i watch it on the telly
Date: 8/22/2017 7:57:00 AM
A wonderful sonnet..
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Date: 8/17/2017 8:58:00 PM
Hi Ralph, a wondrous work I truly enjoyed :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 11:14:00 AM
A lovely write Ralph :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 6:55:00 AM
Striking work, Ralph....nicely done!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/17/2017 12:36:00 PM
Thanks John: I admire your prose!
Date: 8/15/2017 10:50:00 AM
beautifully written.
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Date: 8/14/2017 1:40:00 AM
The Solar and the Lunar, the darkness and the brightness, they 're all failed romance. Isn't science beautiful?
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Date: 8/13/2017 8:39:00 PM
Hi Julie: Thank you. Let's wait for the nova. (ha ha)
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Date: 8/13/2017 6:39:00 PM
Clever working love with a solar eclipse. Enjoyed reading it.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/13/2017 6:57:00 PM
THANK YOU, SUNLITE GET READY ON MONDAY
Date: 8/13/2017 6:26:00 PM
Love your dedication to solar eclipse, Ralph.. sorry about the failed romance.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/13/2017 6:58:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay: In this case opposites do not attract.

Book: Shattered Sighs