Francine Roberts Poet Limerick

My Sneakers- Shoe Contest

They're old, they're ugly, they're falling apart.

Had them forever, they're part of my heart.

They're comfy and old

And to me, pure gold

And if you throw them out, a fight WILL start.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Robert Pettit February 7, 2011 at 8:29 AM Looks like a good entry for the shoe contest.

Nette Onclaud February 6, 2011 at 8:54 AM the more worn they are, the better they get ( i have a pair like 'em)!! such enchanting, charming expressions about your favorite sneakers, francine.. best of winning streaks to you! :) huggs, nette

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2011 at 6:21 AM Enjoyed reading your Limerick..We all have a pair at sometimes in our lives..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Sara

Michael J. Falotico February 6, 2011 at 6:07 AM lol, you sound like my wife... and myself with my fav. sneakers...very enjoyed..best of luck in the contest...always Michael

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2011 at 11:49 PM Love the topic you present here, Fancine. Very nice!! You sure do love your sneakers. High rating for this one, sweetie!