Jenish Somadas Poet Sonnet

My Sky

Yes, I built a boundless blue sky
For me and my fancies to fly
Countless cotton candy clear clouds
Flying in flocks like swimming doubts.

Yes, there lightning flashes thunders
When my mood do stupid blunders
Dropping snow, showering bright sun
In a day as mind wishes fun.

Pouring rain and swirling wind blows
When my thoughts and reactions rose
But my sky go moonless at night
As my eyes close ending star sight.

Yes, 'll let your ship fly my zone
When mind merges singing same tune.


Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S CHOICE A,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Shirley Hawkins May 14, 2020 at 6:58 PM Wow! ... A winner for sure,Congratulations Jenish... Take care Shirley Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 11:48 PM Thank you for your delightful comment Shirley..Takecare always ..

Constance La France May 13, 2020 at 6:51 PM Jenish, lovely, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 10:49 PM Thank you Constance..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 13, 2020 at 1:25 PM Wonderful! I could watch the sky for hours, with or without birds ;), xomo Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 10:49 PM Thank you Pigeon for your kind support..

Mohan Chutani May 13, 2020 at 10:59 AM A boundless blue sky beauty. Enjoyed. Mohan Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 10:48 PM Thank you Mohan..

Aditi Mishra May 13, 2020 at 9:23 AM "Dropping snow, showering bright sun"..beautiful imagery. This takes me to another world Jenish :) Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 9:31 AM Thank you Aditi for your kind words... Stay safe..

Vijay Pandit May 13, 2020 at 6:15 AM The first stanza spells the essence of your poem..beautifully said, Jenish:..Yes, I built a boundless blue sky ..For me and my fancies to fly.. Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 6:38 AM Thank you Vijay for your delightful words..

Swetha Vangaveti May 13, 2020 at 5:58 AM Wonderfully penned!!! Jenish Somadas May 13, 2020 at 6:07 AM Thank you for your delightful comment Swetha..Takecare always..