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My Sky

Yes, I built a boundless blue sky For me and my fancies to fly Countless cotton candy clear clouds Flying in flocks like swimming doubts. Yes, there lightning flashes thunders When my mood do stupid blunders Dropping snow, showering bright sun In a day as mind wishes fun. Pouring rain and swirling wind blows When my thoughts and reactions rose But my sky go moonless at night As my eyes close ending star sight. Yes, 'll let your ship fly my zone When mind merges singing same tune. Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S CHOICE A,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 5/14/2020 6:58:00 PM
Wow! ... A winner for sure,Congratulations Jenish... Take care Shirley
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:48:00 PM
Thank you for your delightful comment Shirley..Takecare always ..
Date: 5/13/2020 6:51:00 PM
Jenish, lovely, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 10:49:00 PM
Thank you Constance..
Date: 5/13/2020 1:25:00 PM
Wonderful! I could watch the sky for hours, with or without birds ;), xomo
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 10:49:00 PM
Thank you Pigeon for your kind support..
Date: 5/13/2020 10:59:00 AM
A boundless blue sky beauty. Enjoyed. Mohan
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 10:48:00 PM
Thank you Mohan..
Date: 5/13/2020 9:23:00 AM
"Dropping snow, showering bright sun"..beautiful imagery. This takes me to another world Jenish :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Aditi for your kind words... Stay safe..
Date: 5/13/2020 6:15:00 AM
The first stanza spells the essence of your poem..beautifully said, Jenish:..Yes, I built a boundless blue sky ..For me and my fancies to fly..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your delightful words..
Date: 5/13/2020 5:58:00 AM
Wonderfully penned!!!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 6:07:00 AM
Thank you for your delightful comment Swetha..Takecare always..

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