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My Sister Love-A Collaboration With Broken Wings

Not a day since you left me sister- does my h e a r t not WEEP a thousand sorrows, oh, sister love my TEARS could fill an ocean blue. I stand at your T O M B and wonder of what could have been, and recall how PEACEFUL you were in r e p o s e , hands in prayer, rosy lips and cheeks, oh how BEAUTIFUL! Perfectly lovely except you were quite dead, QUITE dead . . . Neither, from the deepest S H A D O W S in my SOUL , sister- can I silence the sweet sound of your voice, how I wish to s i n g with you songs of J O Y that I so affectionately remember as I whisper at your grave. Sister dear, I smile FORLORN and l o n e l y with faded m e m o r i e s of you and I return to haunting vivid thoughts. W E were but children when you went away . . . As I brush the vines from the stone I wonder, sister- would Y O U do the same if it were ME lying there, so C L O S E we were when we were young. The moss on your tomb is soft in the morning mist; it reminds me of your s k i n when last I TOUCHED you, s m o o t h and c o o l as your head lay tenderly on that small pillow. oh, beautiful d r e a m e r do you dream of me in heaven above . . . And when my days on this EARTH end sister- will you be there at the golden g a t e to welcome me home, and take my HAND in yours just like you used to. Can we s t r o l l heaven's gardens together, and sit side-by-side on the grass w h i s p e r i n g silly secrets . . . I touch your name ENGRAVED deep into the cold stone, and my heart b l e e d s again and again, each time . . .
07/05/2017
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Duncan Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Beautiful collaboration and win :)
Inman Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Hi Debbie, thank you for sharing your time with me tonight and thank you for your lovely comments.
May Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:57 AM
A poignant write...Congrats to both of you on a fine win
Inman Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Thanks Joseph.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 1:49 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Inman Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Many congrats James - I was very surprised to see your Constance had written this as the style is so similar to LuLoo with the use of capitals and i thought it was her poem! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Inman Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 2:49 PM
Thank you for hosting the contest Jan. It was a pleasure writing with BW for your contest, now, to find the time to read all of them.
La France Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 9:59 AM
James, we got second place in the contest! Thank you so much for writing with me, we match perfectly, we wove those alternating verses without hesitation, you matched my style so well. I would be honored to write with you anytime! CONGRATULATIONS!
Inman Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 2:47 PM
No BW, thank you for giving me the pleasure of writing with you. Any time.
Marie Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:32 PM
An incredibly emotive write that leaves me with tears and wanting to offer comfort, though I know it is weak. That is the powerful impact of your words. The subject matter is devastatingly life altering, and your words have us feel it's loss, it's unbearableness and how love can pen such staggeringly beautiful poetry. Tremendous effort and great writing. I congratulate you both xo
Inman Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:29 PM
I wrote a reply to your lovely comment Lynn but it's not here. OH NO! Sorry, I got side tracked. I give all the credit to BW. It's her story.
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 4:25 PM
A beautifully rendered collaboration, James & Constance. There is a deep show of emotions when close siblings are separated by death! // paul
Inman Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 7:33 PM
Thank you Paul.
La France Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 8:45 AM
James, thank you so much for being my writing partner for this project, our words meshed together as one, I am sure few would know who wrote which verses, thank you from the bottom on my broken heart, lol ~
Inman Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Thank you BW. It was my pleasure. It was your heart that made the poem. I just filled in the spaces.
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 7:46 PM
wow, this was so well collaborated. Even without her having told me, I would have known who you did this with!! GREAT job , my friend. I will go see BW's now!!
Inman Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 9:43 PM
BW definitely has a unique style. I'm glad you enjoyed it. She gets all of the credit.
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Ralph, what is this poetry arts page you were talking about where you saw my poem? Let me see this collab write now!
Inman Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 9:36 PM
Left a reply on your "The Eyes Have It" poem. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/art/178ddbd9-3f86-40fd-bfd7-25263f614f15
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 3:36 PM
This is such a tender moving piece from both of you. I had a sister who died really young breaking our hearts. Her name was Marlena. Best of luck in the contest. : )
Inman Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Connie, thank you for the lovely visit. I feel for your loss.
Downing  Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 7:40 PM
A very deep heart touching. Can't help my tears flowing down. You two have collaborated something so beautifully heartfelt... hugs :)
Inman Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 11:52 PM
Thank you for the beautiful comment Akkina.
Manassian Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 4:28 AM
Such a deep and sad write. You both have brought to light to grief of losing a loved one. It's a grief that softens with time...yet it never leaves. Well I know, for I lost my dear mother.
Inman Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 11:01 AM
One of the many inevitable consequences of aging Eileen. I had a great fear of loosing my mother when I was in my twenties. She is still with us but others are not. Thank you for your visit.
Daniel Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 9:45 AM
This is dark and so wonderful that I couldn't distinguish your work from Constance's :) well written, James and BW:)
Inman Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Jo, thank you for the kind words. I give credit to BW, she created the context and set the tone with her sad beautiful words.
Lane Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Your combined verses follow the same dark path and so nicely entwined, James.
Inman Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Lin, it was such a pleasure for me to be able to write with BW. And may I say, what a lovely new photo you have.
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