My Sister Love - Collaboration

Not a day since you left me sister-
does my  h e a r t  not  WEEP  a thousand sorrows,
oh, sister love my  TEARS  could fill an ocean blue.
I stand at your  T O M B  and wonder of what could have been,
and recall how  PEACEFUL  you were in  r e p o s e ,
hands in prayer, rosy lips and cheeks,  oh how  BEAUTIFUL!
Perfectly lovely except you were quite dead,  QUITE  dead . . . 

Neither, from the deepest  S H A D O W S  in my  SOUL , sister-
can I silence the sweet sound of your voice,
how I wish to  s i n g  with you songs of  J O Y
that I so affectionately remember as I whisper at your grave.
Sister dear, I smile  FORLORN  and  l o n e l y 
with faded  m e m o r i e s  of you and I return to haunting vivid thoughts.
W E  were but children when you went away . . . 

As I brush the vines from the stone I wonder, sister-
would  Y O U  do the same if it were  ME  lying there,
so  C L O S E   we were when we were young.
The moss on your tomb is soft in the morning mist;
it reminds me of your  s k i n  when last I  TOUCHED  you,
s m o o t h  and  c o o l  as your head lay tenderly on that small pillow.
oh, beautiful  d r e a m e r  do you dream of me in heaven above . . . 

And when my days on this  EARTH  end sister-
will you be there at the golden  g a t e  to welcome me home,
and take my  HAND  in yours just like you used to.
Can we  s t r o l l  heaven's gardens together,
and sit side-by-side on the grass  w h i s p e r i n g  silly secrets . . . 
I touch your name  ENGRAVED  deep into the cold stone,
and my heart  b l e e d s  again and again, each time . . . 

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July 5, 2017


Poetry/Verse/My Sister Love
Copyright Protected, ID 07-9181-22-05
All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France
In Collaboration with James Inman

Written for the Standard Collaboration Contest
sponsor, Jan Allison07, Judged/2017 

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Duncan Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Love this collaboration. I read it on his page so I had to come find it on your poems & your win with it too :) fav poem!
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Debbie, thank for visiting. Yes this was a beautiful collaboration with James, he was able to match my style so well, it is hard to see when I begin and he ends
May Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:59 AM
A poignant write...Congrats to both of you on a fine win
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Thank you Joseph
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 1:48 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Thank you Sunshine
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Many congrats Constance and James - I was very surprised to see your name as the style is so similar to LuLoo with the use of capitals and i thought it was her poem! many congrats on your win:-0 hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Jan, thank you so much for the contest and our great won. Yes Laura and I write very similiar
Inman Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 10:25 AM
BW, I was honored to be included in your beautiful poem. Thank you for allowing me to join you.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:23 AM
James and thank you for your talent . I will write with you anytime
Inman Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 9:58 PM
BW, thank you for inviting me to join you on this wonderful adventure. Your lovely poems have always been a favorite of mine and it has been a pleasure writing with you.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 7:48 PM
yes, indeed, you two made a beautiful poem together, Constance. Way to go!! and to your amazing partner as well.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Andrea, yes we made a beautiful writing team
Daniel Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 9:46 AM
This is dark and so wonderful that I couldn't distinguish your work from your partner's :) well written, both of you :)
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:25 AM
No thank you for the wonderful yes we were pretty seamless
Lane Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Your paths crossed at the right junctures for you combined verses. Well done, both of you.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Lol thank you so much
Smith Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 7:40 PM
Such sadness, so well done, congratulations BW and best wishes..
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Charlie thank you, yes so beautifully sad
Wanter Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 6:39 PM
So tender! I lost my baby sister in 2008. She's playing her piano in heaven.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Sun, so sorry for your loss .I know this pain so well
Sands Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 4:53 PM
This is beautiful and full of emotion, keep going! I can relate to this as well
La France Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Heidi thanks you for the beautiful
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