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Poetry/Verse/My Sister Love
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1633-053-30
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 30, 2024
For the International Contest, Legend
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 04/08/2024

First Place

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"Of two sisters, I was the follower and she was the adventurer." Quote by _ Constance Suzanne, leads me to her place in the cemetery and I can hear the night sighing I want to stay with her Oh, you may think me crazy but I will miss my sister forever I wish we could drink tea like our yesterdays green tea all the way from China in fancy cups I tell her how much I love her still but have brought no flowers in this dream and she lets the sparkling stars answer whispering I will always love you too and I want to kiss and hug her for she is my legend and my hero she is my sister love Suzanne, was an adventurer one day we climbed a snow mountain we stood so proud from our high tower surveying our kingdom and then we were slipping and she let go of my hand, falling sliding off the mountain of snow I screamed her name over and over as a sea of snow crashed down leaving her broken below and my life would never be the same she had let go of my hand to save me as she sank like a stone oh, how many times I have wished to die and I want to kiss and hug her for she is my legend and my hero she is my sister love Suzanne, is floating and is leading me to the cemetery gate she is wearing a pretty dress bought from a thrift store for her funeral and the moon shines down like honey as we move in silence past the praying angel statues headstones and decaying flowers oh, she saved me that day when we were just children playing sisters who loved each other so much and will forever and evermore Suzanne holds the gate open for me in this dream and I want to kiss and hug her for she is my legend and my hero she is my sister love

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Robert Sidwell

Date: 4/10/2024 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on the win for this beautiful, heartfelt and touching poem!

Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2024 2:01:00 PM

Robert, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, hugs

David Crandall

Date: 4/10/2024 9:42:00 AM

Constance, a beautiful, moving, sad tribute.

Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2024 2:02:00 PM

David, thank you for the compliment, hugs

Thompson Emate

Date: 4/10/2024 5:49:00 AM

This is a touching and heartfelt poem, Constance. It's so sad that your sister had to leave that way. A memory that's difficult to erase. Congratulations on your top win.

Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2024 2:03:00 PM

Thompson, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, hugs

Silent One

Date: 4/10/2024 4:07:00 AM

Awww this is so touching and heartfelt, I am so happy you had a sister like that, but also so sad that she died in such a horrific manner, but saved you, an ultimate sacrifice from a sister... This is beautiful poem and I'm sorry you lost your sister this way.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2024 2:04:00 PM

Silent, thank you for the contest and my awesome placement, and for the compassion, comment, compliment and congratulations, hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/1/2024 4:00:00 PM

So sad to lose a sister in such tragic circumstances Constance. Sister love and a bond such as you both had is legendary and lasts for eternity … Beryl

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:30:00 PM

Beryl, thank you for the lovely comment, hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/31/2024 4:20:00 PM

Dear Constance, your poem touches my heart - trying to imagine how much you miss your sister, who is definitely a "Legend" to you. You are able to depict your deep emotions with soul-stirring words, and your readers definitely feel the poignant and unbreakable bond! To my faves, Dear Constance. Love and Hugs ~

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:32:00 PM

Mala, thank for the compliment on my poem and my writing, for the nice comment, and the FAV, love and hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 3/31/2024 2:15:00 AM

Dear Constance. This is soul stirring and so touching, i felt the depth of longing and grief flowing throughout your lines. I can never imagine how you mus have felt or is feeling, but the way youv expressed here depicts love and emotions in the most eloquent manner. My twin sister means the most to me too, and i can understand the sister bond, sending you light always. Best wishes for the contest. Fave it is

Constance La France
Date: 3/31/2024 1:18:00 PM

Ink, thank you for the compliment and wonderful comment, and your compassion, for sharing encouragement, and the FAV, hugs, Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/30/2024 5:53:00 PM

Dear Constance Delving into the depths of love and grief, your poetry explores the experiences you had with your sister, Suzanne. Loss, memory, and the unbreakable tie between siblings are some of the topics covered. It centers on the profound feelings you experienced when she died. You also reflect on the sisterly bond, the painful loss of Suzanne, and the hope of eternal reunion with her. I hope you have a nice Easter.

Constance La France
Date: 3/31/2024 1:20:00 PM

Sotto, thank you for your compassion and beautiful comment, hugs, Constance