Andrea Dietrich Poet Senryu

My Simple Valentine Story

dancing clumsily -
shy blue cowboy eyes smiling. . . . 
he swept me away

marriage fast foreknown -
no proposal from his lips. . . . 
just lots of kisses

my man of few words
tells me, “I’ll always love you”. . . .
few words are true words

For the The Story of Valentine Poetry Contest
of Olajide Adelana

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Robin Davis February 26, 2014 at 9:51 PM Andrea Such a loving and romantic poem. The passion and love is clearly understood from your heart to this special person. Nicely done Thanks for the fave and awesome comment on my Romance poem.

John Freeman September 3, 2011 at 10:57 AM Andrea, Nice dedication, is great to see your worth poem in the top three. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne September 3, 2011 at 10:17 AM Sweet piece - many congratulations, Andrea : )

Caryl Ramsdale September 3, 2011 at 3:12 AM A Second Place Win Congratulations. CR

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 2, 2011 at 8:31 PM Wonderful poem!!! Congrats. on your win! truly Lovely poem!------Lori

Afroze Ali September 1, 2011 at 11:18 PM Lovely poem Congratulations:) Happiness Always.

Gwendolen Song September 1, 2011 at 5:58 PM What words were lacking in him....God made up with YOU!! ha ha. I know your Joel will be enthralled with your win in this contest. Always fun to read your stuff...I am curious about that Dorthy poem next! That was killerific! Gwendolen

Constance La France September 1, 2011 at 3:07 PM Congratulations Andrea on 2nd place, this poem is so full of "simple" love, it really touched my heart ~~

Wilma Neels September 1, 2011 at 2:22 PM Ah this is so sweet Andrea, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest, hope you shared this with your hubby ;) love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown September 1, 2011 at 2:05 PM Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan September 1, 2011 at 1:37 PM a sweet dedication. did he like it? congratulations on your win :)

Paul Beadnall September 1, 2011 at 1:23 PM Congratulations with your winner Andrea,well deserved blessings from Paul

Joyce Johnson September 1, 2011 at 11:30 AM Lucky you. and congratulations on your win too.

Lee Ramage September 1, 2011 at 11:26 AM ooooh someone who still loves their husband, a rare commodity now. Excellent poem, thanks for letting us in and sharing. Lee

Dinda Minardi September 1, 2011 at 11:06 AM Awww, very sweet. Congratulations, dear. Well deserved placement :) love, Dinda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 1, 2011 at 11:04 AM Congrats Andrea on your second place win with this lovely poetry my friend..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta September 1, 2011 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on the second place win , andrea

David Williams September 1, 2011 at 10:32 AM hey Andrea congrats on your win, great poem..David

Carrie Richards September 1, 2011 at 10:22 AM Ahhh......what a lovely tribute to your guy!! Great job, Andrea....Congrats!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Andrea. Love, Carol

Deirdre Omaidin February 18, 2011 at 7:57 AM great story, unique and beautiful, congrats Déirdre

Michael J. Falotico February 18, 2011 at 4:48 AM Well you did a great job Andrea... congrats for this big win for you...luv Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 17, 2011 at 11:57 PM Many Congrats Andrea for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece straight from Heart. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:32 PM I knew this was a winner, Andrea. Beautiful Senryu. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:24 PM nice true love story, Andrea. Congratulations to you on this special win for you both and the contest!

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