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My Simple Valentine Story

dancing clumsily -
shy blue cowboy eyes smiling. . . . 
he swept me away

marriage fast foreknown -
no proposal from his lips. . . . 
just lots of kisses

my man of few words
tells me, “I’ll always love you”. . . .
few words are true words

For the The Story of Valentine Poetry Contest
of Olajide Adelana

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Robin Davis

Date: 2/26/2014 9:51:00 PM

Andrea Such a loving and romantic poem. The passion and love is clearly understood from your heart to this special person. Nicely done Thanks for the fave and awesome comment on my Romance poem.

John Freeman

Date: 9/3/2011 10:57:00 AM

Andrea, Nice dedication, is great to see your worth poem in the top three. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 9/3/2011 10:17:00 AM

Sweet piece - many congratulations, Andrea : )

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 3:12:00 AM

A Second Place Win Congratulations. CR

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/2/2011 8:31:00 PM

Wonderful poem!!! Congrats. on your win! truly Lovely poem!------Lori

Afroze Ali

Date: 9/1/2011 11:18:00 PM

Lovely poem Congratulations:) Happiness Always.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/1/2011 5:58:00 PM

What words were lacking in him....God made up with YOU!! ha ha. I know your Joel will be enthralled with your win in this contest. Always fun to read your stuff...I am curious about that Dorthy poem next! That was killerific! Gwendolen

Constance La France

Date: 9/1/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on 2nd place, this poem is so full of "simple" love, it really touched my heart ~~

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/1/2011 2:22:00 PM

Ah this is so sweet Andrea, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest, hope you shared this with your hubby ;) love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2011 2:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/1/2011 1:37:00 PM

a sweet dedication. did he like it? congratulations on your win :)

Paul Beadnall

Date: 9/1/2011 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations with your winner Andrea,well deserved blessings from Paul

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/1/2011 11:30:00 AM

Lucky you. and congratulations on your win too.

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/1/2011 11:26:00 AM

ooooh someone who still loves their husband, a rare commodity now. Excellent poem, thanks for letting us in and sharing. Lee

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/1/2011 11:06:00 AM

Awww, very sweet. Congratulations, dear. Well deserved placement :) love, Dinda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 11:04:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on your second place win with this lovely poetry my friend..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2011 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win , andrea

David Williams

Date: 9/1/2011 10:32:00 AM

hey Andrea congrats on your win, great poem..David

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/1/2011 10:22:00 AM

Ahhh......what a lovely tribute to your guy!! Great job, Andrea....Congrats!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Andrea. Love, Carol

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/18/2011 7:57:00 AM

great story, unique and beautiful, congrats Déirdre