My Silent Sanctuary

Fully encompassed in luxuriously thickness of forest foliage,
	The dog and I sat down to rest. Me on a felled log,
                                             him, 
                                    near a creek’s edge.

Shiny leaves fluttered a silent greeting, 
                    welcoming us, as if she had not seen
                                    such beings in
	               A long time, maybe hundreds of years.

I marvel at the vast mysteriousness of the woods,
              she has kept her secrets through a multitude of sun downs,
                                       and  likely                    
                               will not give them up.  

    The enormous spider webs I walked through to get here
                               instantly feel worth it,
                       Even if my skin is crawling a bit
              as I imagine some of the wee creatures in my hair.

	My heart leaps with pure joy as I bend 
             to select a few pretty rocks from the creek’s edge.  
                  Wading in a bit farther, 
                          marveling at the clear coolness of the water. 
                             Is it drinkable?                      Yes, it is.

	Has anyone else ever ventured this deeply into this silent sanctuary?
                                      I hear a slight noise.
                                A twig breaking. 
                                    The dog barks.
                      Nothing else moves or makes a sound.

	              This has become my private sanctuary,
              a place where my heart can rejuvenate and relive
                      These silences on busy days
                          when nothing else feels silent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/26/2018 8:46:00 AM
Another gem from your treasure chest! A pleasure this great morn to read such a beautiful creation! Another fav...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/26/2018 1:34:00 PM
I enjoyed writing it, but I truly enjoy living it.
Date: 7/25/2018 4:24:00 PM
no wonder this write is enticing; you have a heavenly space to nourish your heart, caren... huggs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/25/2018 5:51:00 PM
I do, and I love it there. I somehow manage to always live in the country with a magical sanctuary.
Date: 7/25/2018 12:02:00 PM
What an amazing place you have Caren ,at one with nature. Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/25/2018 4:00:00 PM
I love being out there, of course, this being tick season, keeps me inside a bit more than usual and the HEAT!
Date: 7/25/2018 12:07:00 AM
This sounds like an amazing place to find peace, and to decompress. I would love to have a place like this.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/25/2018 12:10:00 AM
I have been there, Becca, it is a place you never forget. I used to live there.
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