Anisha Dutta Poet Etheree

My Shoes

MY SHOES
                                   
                                            My 
                                        stylish 
                                      fashionable
                                 friend owns cupboard
                                  full of hundred pair 
                               of shoes to match with her
                           various colored dresses.
                         On completion of perfection  
                      The spectrum of her choices is so broad.
                           So difficult to choose the exact pair
                              to tally with particular dress. 
                          I am free with three pair of shoes  
                                home use,walking, other uses                             
                                  So easy going is life
                                   avoiding confusion.
                                   totally time saving.
                                    Relaxed cheerful.
                                       One pair gets
                                           torn, next
                                               comes.

  08/28/16
                    My Shoes poetry contest by Lewis Raynes

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Joseph May August 31, 2016 at 7:02 AM Congrats on your win Anisha

Sandra Haight August 30, 2016 at 8:02 PM I like your take on the theme, Anisha! I agree...simplicity is best! Congrats on your HM placement. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison August 30, 2016 at 11:11 AM Dropping back with my congrats Anisha:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane August 30, 2016 at 8:59 AM I no longer feel the need for so many pair. Comfort takes precedence now. Well done and congrats, Anisha.

Agnes Krampe August 30, 2016 at 7:08 AM Nice take on the shoe theme. My sister is like your friend :)

Beejadhur Sewumber August 28, 2016 at 8:06 PM Shoes is an all time poem Anisha. I like the points you have written. best of luck. Continue.

Jan Allison August 28, 2016 at 2:20 PM Your poem made me smile Anisha. I hate buying shoes as I have quite wide small feet but I do have about 12 pairs I guess. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx